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by Hypoxia
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What can be considered as a vital aspect of life; the simplicities, the difficulties, the hindrances, or the blessings? 
 
An individual may find it to one, the other, both, or between; however, all are inevitably experienced in a lifetime. Regardless, whatever the circumstances that this person may have experienced, it determines their decision to a undeniable, destined fate - in which how they react can lead to everyday struggle, or be the miracle of catharsis.  
 
What’s encountered is what all naturally fear for:
 
Treading into the unknown. 
 
This - this is where people either refrain or enter the foreign area, regardless of what’s done, they’re accompanied with doubt, anxiety, paranoia. 
The slightest idea of leaving the "perfect" equilibrium of life, stepping away from the "comfort" zone. 
 
Endless questions repeat, clouding the mind. However, more particularly, just one simple question.
 
 
"Should I?"
 
 
 
 

Foreword

I don't know I started on this story like during May, a little after I started "Collapse". It's loosely based off relatism, where everything is interconnected and what not. but IDK Im NOT SMART IM JUST TRYING TO SOUND dEPE and stuff haha ah aHAHHAHA idk what im doing

Hm, what else. It's a story with, I guess you can call an OC, named Hana - along with Hoya, Dongwoo, and Sunggyu of Infinite. Yep. I don't knwow hat else to righwrITE IM TIRED

((also this story is supposed to tug ur heartstrings or something idk)) 

Regardless, I hope you all enjoy! 

Feel free to comment whenever - about whatever! I love reading comments :-) :-))))))))))))))00000000000000

Check out my first story, "Collapse" starring two members of MBLAQ!! (not saying who bc i want u to click it HEEHEE heHEEH)


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Spazztastic045  on says:
Ooohh how sweet~ First of: love it. You all ready know how fluid and vibrant your writing is so, I won't gawk at that. What I do wish to take a gander at is how well you can manipulate imagery into your story. From the luminescent asphalt she walked on to the obsidian colored sky, all great and fresh in my mind. The contrast of the inside and outside of the flower shop was great, I think that's my favorite part. And Sunggyu~ oh fkjad;fjadklfjads his appearance finally! It seems like it's only the younger generation that can work in this town, and I like that for some reason. They seem like pure, goodhearted kids without any ulterior motive, just doesn't there best to help each other out and provide for their family. I also like the way you've got this town set aside from the city, "an escape from change". Sounds positive here, but could this also have a negative impact on the mindset of the people there? Maybe even their health?? Ooh I'm just tingling with excitement and anticipation! Good work man, you keep it up. Good luck and happy writing!

Spazztastic045  on says:
Very nice. Sounds kinda angsty and sophisticated so far. I'm curious as to how a girl like Hana knows Sunggyu and the other members. I think it'll be fun seeing what their relationship is and how they know the parents as well. And oh, the parents, goodness, Lord bless the parents! I feel sorry for this girl already. Overall a great chap and wonderful grammar with like maybe 2 typos but otherwise perfect. Proud of you Gam. Keep up the great work, good luck and happy writing!

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