1 Jung Yunho Time Slip [Hiatus]

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GuestZ  on says about chapter 9:
that's cool, take your time! I don't really mind ^^
-> at least your going to update at least once every 6 months XD

Good luck in your exams and the audition! no worries everyone has dreams don't they? hope you make it in, fighting!!

zero4life  on says about chapter 9:
dear, all i have to say is:
take your time. Pressure isn't good for anyone. I'll be waiting for your amazing updates and i'll read them with joy like i always do.
and about the sme audition. Go for it! It's not silly to dream about that. I dream about it too. And i hope one day i have the courage and the skills to do an audition.
I have to keep hoping. I have to keep the faith. ^^ we all do.
Good luck with everything ;)

GuestZ  on says:
pace of story...
do you mean the updates by themselves or the entire story as a whole?

Muneunim  on says about chapter 7:
Yay! An update. Hahaha the last part was so cute and funny ^^

Muneunim  on says about chapter 6:
Update soon? XD I skip all the scenes until Jaejoong's character appears too. XDXD You should continue on in the Joseon Era for the next chapter.

GuestZ  on says about chapter 6:
Next chapter should continue in joseon era since changminnie's actions have be said by dr jin and JYJ probably dont know anything... so there's nothing to talk about in the modern era? unless of course, JYJ somehow found out about yunho's accident from the sugery team's cassies... or changminnie's is comming over...

plus I wanna see what happens when yunho confronts the oblivious kyung tak/jaejoong lookalike!!

GuestZ  on says about chapter 4:
7 ipods... you know yunho (or jaejoong) you can just get/buy a sony walkman - it's battery have at least 18 hours of continous playing before running out... LOL

OH! handphones! Does it work work? I mean...
there's this mainland china drama where the guy was sent back to the past and he has his handphone with him and for some reason he can receive his sister's texts to him (but only his sister's tho) ...lol, it was so wierd XD

hyesung  on says about chapter 6:
i think you should just continue with their current situation instead of modern era. xD it would be more natural to show yunho's expression when he sees jaejoong in the joseon ear. :D also, i think you already added enough from dr.jin's flashbacks so unless you add changmin or someone else who came from the modern era, then i don't think you need to show anymore of it (unless they're talking about it) but otherwise, where you stopped is good. :D keeps the suspense going and yay! jaejoong/kyungtak is here! \o/

hyesung  on says about chapter 5:
for a moment i thought you went to changmin's time and when he was thinking about his eating habits but it turned out yunho was the one who was remembering about it. xD (i had to re-read that a bit to make sure). though it was nice and isn't yunho hungry? ;A; dang, it's a wonder how he could possibly run that much on an empty stomach but if your life depends on it, i suppose he doesn't have a choice to beginwith. >.< though i did like how you made the transition to dr. jin :) now yunho probably thinks he's crazy and still in the present instead of in the past. xD ahhh that was really nice and i can't wait for more updates. :)

ounayouna  on says about chapter 5:
update soon.....
not long after yunho will meet jaejoong..... or it will kyung tak??

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