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Wish You Were Not Here Completed!
by herotpetot
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kim jaejoong, jung yunho, shim changmin, park yoochun, kim junsu
Description
Kim Jaejoong was a new kid in town. He had just graduated from high school and his first job in Seoul was a waiter in a coffee shop. He was a good kid, always kind to others but there was a person who's willing to piss him off just for the sake to attract his attention. He was a chaebol, who was very into Jaejoong that made the younger kid suffocated everytime they met. His name was Jung Yunho.
Jung Yunho loves to tease Kim Jaejoong and thought it was very amusing to see his reaction everytime they meet. But then, his cousin Shim Changmin came along and there were tension arising between the three of them. What made Jaejoong so angry? What causes the tension between them?
Foreword
Here's a brief description of the characters :
Kim Jaejoong :
A new kid in town from Jeju. He had a happy-go-lucky attitude but quickly turned cold towards people who are not familiar with him. He had a dark past that made him unable to feel loved or love someone again.
Jung Yunho :
A chaebol who had his eyes on Jaejoong since the very first day. He is actually a kind-hearted person but he acted like a jerk just to shine in front of a person he likes a.k.a Jaejoong.
Shim Changmin :
He is a cousin of Yunho. He is an arrogant person with a Voldemort-like attitude to reach his goals. Even though he looked like a wicked person, he had a really fragile heart. He seldomly let anyone enters his heart except when he first met Jaejoong.
Kim Junsu :
Jaejoong's best friend since he arrived in Seoul. He was a sweet heart who had been caring towards Jaejoong. Changmin likes to tease him a lot when they met, and that resulted in a new dynamic in Changmin's relationship.
Park Yoochun :
Jaejoong's best friend since they were kids. Yoochun was playful but protective of Jaejoong. He was the only person Jaejoong could trust and he knew everything about him and vice versa.
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sweet_emy on says about chapter 33:
Omooooooooooo so nice i love it , you did a great job , thank you
but you didn't mention yoochun in this last chapter anyway it was perfect .
there is only one thing i didn't get very well , is the relationship between jae and yoochun !! who fall in love with the other ? and who reject the other ?
and yeh the best character i found here where minnie and yoochun .. ohhhhhhhhhhh i like them soo much <3
missjj89 on says about chapter 33:
ahhhh,,,
cool,,
i like minsu here,,
actually, i'm a yunja shipper,but i really want to punch yunho in this story...aaaaarrrgghh
uw1m4-weema on says about chapter 33:
finished and satisfying reading... great story... ^.^
JYC868 on says about chapter 33:
i love you author nim XDDDD TnT so the story has end?? boo...well, thanks for make me smile...sad...and angry when read it XDDDDD
see you again in other story author nim ^^
Carla58 on says about chapter 33:
<3 The story was really good!
I'm glad they all had their happy ending, and it wasn't a lame ending btw :)
Thanks for this story it was an interesting read :D
YunJaeDDiction on says about chapter 33:
kyaaaaaa..
i didnt expect that this story will end this soon u_u
hehe even i still craving of lovey-dovey of yunjae but u have a good story, thanks for sharing. will wait ur other osm story authorssi :
mania_bi on says about chapter 33:
but can't it have sequal or another chapters ? their moment was little (0______0) plz >:)
Tankoiro on says about chapter 33:
It's done?
Omo!! I don't want it to end yet!! T^T
I want a sequel!!!! XD
Jae hasn't said the magic words to Yunho.. It's not the end yet ~ LoL
mania_bi on says about chapter 33:
wow i love this chapter so much ...everything solve smoothly ...iam happy for yunjae and minsu and wish that toochun would be happy too ...the yunjae kissing was sp sweet :) ...thanks alot to you dear author :)
mjjejae_mira on says about chapter 33:
finally everything back to normal..
and that's good, Jae does not feel pity for the bully and let them go but at least he didn't let his father know about it..
Author-shi, thanks for this beautiful masterpiece ^^,)/
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