Chapter 1: I added this one to my "Favorites" list right away. Not everything in life is good and the girls surely have their bad moments. You wrote about this brilliantly! I loved it ^^
I'm usually a slient reader so i don't know what to say really *awkward*
But i enjoyed this oneshot ^^. It left me wanting to read more. Sometimes i did get confused with who is talking but i kinda figured out at end.
Overall a good read!
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