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Sincerely, Your Angel Completed!
by jonghwaan
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luhan
lay
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Yixing, OC, and various idols
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Yixing needs to write a letter, a letter to someone he can't reach with mere sounds. But he wants it to be special, he wants it to be meaningful, and he knows he isn't able to write at that level now so on a whim he signs himself up for Creative Writing. While exploring the deep world of prose, diction, and rhetoric Yixing learns that learning is all the same--whether it's how to write or how to love.
[EXCERPT]
Yixing has a letter to write because he has things to say. Not happy things, not sad things, but the reality he's been hiding from in a world of idealistic fantasies, a world that has recently broken itself, and his life, in two. He can't force the words out of his mouth because they cling to him like leeches, sucking his soul dry of all happiness and warmth. As the spoken word has failed him, he will take refuge in the written. The hands that grip a pen seem to function properly, unlike his heart, and that is ultimately why Yixing has decided to write a letter. This comes with one problem--Yixing doesn't know how to.
Foreword
This was written for Buffalowings and for the When the Rain Ends || Writing Contest.
Credit for the graphic goes to myungju_ @ --lunexotic.
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tyatyonk88 on says about chapter 1:
I love Kris here,,so _____y and epic..threathening to kill everyone's first born child in every of his class..
Yixing n Meixing...so sad..but how can he never ask about Meixing's real condition, he didnt want to know or he was dismissive by nature? :(
shahirashera on says:
Hi authornim! I just want to let you know I nominate your fic for best Kris (for his kickarse attitudes) XD in this award linked below.
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/363127/
castiel on says:
This was so awesome.
Kris was just so great and epic AND HAS PREACHING AS A BACKUP OH GAD SOMEONE PUNCH ME IN THE FACE asdfghjkl;
But... wow. Everything he said is just so spot-on though. And homygod moment because NO LAY THAT CLASS WAS NOT A BLOW-OFF AND YOU LEARNED HOW TO WRITE AND EVEN IF YOU SAY THAT YOU DIDN'T I CALL BULL____ /arm flailing/
Meixingggg. Maybe it was the way she was portrayed? Something about her just told me she was a great person, even though I could only see her through Lay. I guess.
And Tao oh goodgad THIS MAN IS A_____ WHAT IS MY LIFE NOW aslkdfasjdfhkjsd Huuuurrrrr. /shot
BUT THE NINJA!SARCASTIC/CRACKTASTIC HUMOR. Day made. This was all incredibly moving. Also overwhelmingly awesome. Great job you did.
KPossible21 on says:
lol his letter.
it was sweet and real :)
SNSDbabies on says:
Lay is so AWESOME. *O*
I like the epilogue. ^^
dcyseokyu on says:
Yes ... yes ... yes! You are more than awesome, Lay!
Sweet epilogue ^_^
Shyvana on says:
hahaha - that Yixing. Yes, Lay. You're an pretty awesome. :)
Love the epilogue ^^
Shyvana on says:
This is seriously one of the best stories I have ever read. Never have I ever laughed so damn hard in my life for some fanfiction -- damn it! I got it bad for this fic. O__O
You're brilliant. And everything you said -- SO TRUE.
Kris is at his best here. Really love how you made him so ____y and realistic. Of course, I was able to relate to some darn teacher who doesn't do ____ in class and charges us ____ing expensive tuition fees. Well, anyway <___<
This is so good!
Kind of teared up (almost) for Meixing but felt like it was a side story here. Nonetheless, it was great :)
KPossible21 on says:
I envy your descriptive writing.
Professor Wu is enormous for an Asian - I lol-ed at this.xD
Have you been to a Creative Writing class?
LMAO HAHAHA Tao&a_____, Kris' personal secretary, and "where am I going to find another a_____?" XD
I love your sense of humour.
Love the ending :)
P.S.: you made some typo mistakes eg when Lu Han introduces MeiXing to Lay, it said "Mi Xing"; "Kris rolls hie eyes; and some other ones I cbb to type xD
ron337 on says:
HAHAHAAHAA!!! can't get over your toilet story.. XD and the taoris moments.. it's really an enjoyable story~
I guess I'll be waiting for your epilogue then? (^^;;)
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