Revenge. 복수

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Title: Revenge. 복수

Chapter: 11

Genre: Horror, Mystery

Pairing: Onkey, Jongkey (?)

Rating: PG-13 to PG-15

Foreword

Onew and Jong Hyun were found at the doorstep of an Orphanage—Onew was 2 and Jong Hyun was still a baby. In 1996, a huge fire broke out in the building. After a huge struggle, only one of them was saved. 15 years later, the brother whom survived was still haunted by his past….and his brother whom did not understand the reason why he died.

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Sukunthea #1
Rewrite???
When u will finish ur rewrite???
M waiting for this story
That every good story
minjong_world #2
Chapter 11: Wait...that means jonghyun that named by onew killed everyone!? And he can't remmember that he killed them himself!? o.O
Then what about the real onew that killed by fire!? Wasn't it his soul!? It was all jonghyun?...o.O
ninabulett #3
Chapter 12: Found this just now as a light read before bed..turned out it wasn't.. XD
This should be made into a movie, shawols would get the full picture right after the mirror scene..lol..
I like this genre and you've done great! The last scene was creepy..I thought one of his personality would lost and he remained either as onew or jonghyun, but then he woke up with both and concious as both..poor bummie..@_@
Thanx for this btw..it was a good reading..^o^
MagicalRain4
#4
Chapter 12: This story is very nice~Amazing!
I understand that Onew was the one who died 15 years ago and the Onew all along was Jonghyun but with Onew's name.He is mentally unstable and killed everyone(for reasons I do not know) but the last part I am confused.Can you kindly explain everything to me?
thestrangelittlegirl #5
Chapter 12: Oh my gosh... you had me hanging off every single word.... ._.
VIPrimShAplus #6
Chapter 1: and once again. i'm still wonder what.onew/jjong want tell to key in the last.chapter..

hahaa sorry for spam your comment authornim kkk
VIPrimShAplus #7
Chapter 1: and once again. i'm still wonder what.onew/jjong want tell to key in the last.chapter..

hahaa sorry for spam your comment authornim kkk
VIPrimShAplus #8
Chapter 1: oh. finally i read this again..

i think i'm little understand..

first! onew died 15th years ago. right?

second! the savior change jonghyun name as onew. because he feel guilty.

third! so, the killer is jonghyun. right or not?

so, all the time jinki never in this story except in the prolog. it's just jonghyun with onew name?

i'm just still confused. why jonghyun should kill minho taemin and kyuhyun? o.O

thanks author you make me confused..
but i can't lie it's good story ^^
VIPrimShAplus #9
Chapter 12: dear author-nim

you know what? you make me want cry.. i'm really confused with this..

somebody can tell me what actually happened? or i should cry first? hiks (╥_╥)

ok take a deep breathe,
so.. all this time.. who's with key is jonghyun?

argh so confussed for sure.. so who's the killer?

should i read it from first?

(╥_╥)
vampireme12
#10
Chapter 12: I prefer and angst.
Sorry I can't vote on the poll since two answers are not allowed.