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jaeshipper  on says about chapter 1:
aww... thank god yun come to the rescue.. :)

MrsHanchul  on says about chapter 9:
wow, i just read this without stopping..
You are really great author!
take your time..
we will always wait..
=D

kristalesa  on says:
hahahahahahahahaha I was actually laughing too much while being teary eyed. omg yoosu is the best! Hahahaha they were like little interpreters for the yunjae couple. Oh and yunjae can never be cuter than that huh! Good thing you added yoosu for comedy effects puff ^^

"I... I... I-"

"What he means to say is that he likes Jaejoong too, but he's too shy to say it. Thus the stuttering," Junsu interrupted from beside the flustered other.

Jaejoong's eyes widened, still big and filled with tears. He opened his mouth but no words came out.

Yoochun rolled his eyes. "He wants to say 'but what about Beautiful?'"

"Beautiful is Kim Jaejoong. Yunho thinks you're beautiful," Junsu answered.

Yunho nodded his head, too dumstruck and embaresssed to talk.

"He wants a date," Junsu said.

"What time?" Yoochun asked.

"As soon as possible. He's been self conscious of Jaejoong since he first realized the other was looking. Maybe tomorrow?"

"Oh, can't. Jae has work, and then Yoga."

"Wow, yoga? He's flexible?"

"Yeah, he's pretty flexible."

"Yunho's gonna have fun putting him in different positions then, if you know what I mean," Junsu giggled.


please make a sequel!!! I wanna see how flexible jaejoongie can be!

kristalesa  on says:
omg I was being a perv there. The definition and the way you had written it. My mind!!!!! Must have been because of reading too much yunjae yaoi smut T^T well I did enjoyed it and had definitely cracked up in the end. Whoa you got me tricked in there huh nice one!

His hands itches to feel the hard wooden base and the delicious top.

His appetite needed it to fulfill his desires.

He wanted to lick up the sides and taste the falvored juice on his tongue.


Sometimes words can fool people. Tsk tsk tsk ~^.^~

kristalesa  on says:
I agree! He Jaejoong is indeed the five stars. Jaejoong is really dbsk’s mom

"You give a little piece of yourself to each of us," he continued. "You keep a piece of yourself, a space that no one but yourself can understand. Your emotional, understanding piece, you give to Yoochun whenever he's down. Your energetic, charismatic piece, you give to Junsu when he's restless or bored. Your mother-henning piece, you give to Changmin when he's homesick."

"Silly," Yunho laughed, now directly in front of him. A kiss was planted chastely on his head. "You give your heart to them, but you give your love to me," he whispered in his ear.

It really makes a difference because kim jaejoong definitely love yuho more than anything puffo. Hurray yunjae! ~^.^~

kristalesa  on says:
wahahahahahahaha oh I know I know uknow! You will be jung yunho uknow! The husband of kim jejoong /evil laugh/ im a genius right? Hehehehe jaejoong may always have a bad timing but I know that nobody can ever hate him. With that beauty and cuteness? Yep! Nobody can really go against him tee hee hee

oh charades tsuk tsuk that must have been a fun game. Its like role playing this and that. Maybe next time we’ll be playing that with my friends. Oh! Its almost Christmas ^^ how about playing it in there puffo ~^.^~

kristalesa  on says about chapter 5:
wahahahahahahaha oh I know I know uknow! You will be jung yunho uknow! The husband of kim jejoong /evil laugh/ im a genius right? Hehehehe jaejoong may always have a bad timing but I know that nobody can ever hate him. With that beauty and cuteness? Yep! Nobody can really go against him tee hee hee

oh charades tsuk tsuk that must have been a fun game. Its like role playing this and that. Maybe next time we’ll be playing that with my friends. Oh! Its almost Christmas ^^ how about playing it in there puffo ~^.^~

kristalesa  on says about chapter 5:
hahahahahaha I understand yunnie’s problem. Jaejoong is just like a goddess and no great artist can capture his beauty on a ppiece of paper. I liked this convo here:

"Yes!" Yunho huffed. "Your nose is too perfect. Your lips are full and red, almost like scarlet. Your eyes are too big and dark --too expressive. Your hair is always styled, and your cheekbones are sexy. Your jaw angle is perfect, and your skin is milky," Yunho whined.

"I can't draw beauty itself!" he cried out. His confidence shrunk into a tight little ball, wrapping itself and refusing to come out.


Yunho was talking childishly only whining about how to draw ^^ omo such a cutie oh and a very cute couple. Me likey likey

kristalesa  on says about chapter 5:
omo. Yunho and jaejoong always seemed like they have this thin line that connects the both of them. Whenever jaejoong feel down, yunho would be there to lighten up the mood; whenever he feels uneasy, yunho would be there to assure him that everything would be all right and whenever he feels hopeless and suicidal, yunho would be there to tell him that he could lean on him at all times.
When I'm on the edge of insanity, I'd hope you'd come to save me.

This is quite true. Yunho is the only thing that jaejoong needs just to hang on til the end. With yunho around, jaejoong would never have to worry about a thing or two. More power yunjae!

kristalesa  on says about chapter 9:
whoa! ive been really missing out on a lot of chapters huh? curse you college life. tskkk freshman times really cost you a lot of time aint it? anyway i just dropped by to see how things are going... i just want to inform you that im gonna copy this story and just read it at home kay? i'll pop in next time and leave bountiful comments


p.s. i dont plan on plagiarizing this... i perfectly knew how hard it was to create one chapter... this is really wonderful! keep it it up nee~

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