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Miracle [Two-Shot]
by KaishkaKo
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Mir and Joon (MBLAQ members)
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Mir and Joon are driving home after a perfect day together when it happens- they're struck by another vehicle. They were just two kids in love, flirting aimlessly on beaches during the day and cuddling in front of fireplaces once evening came. Joon never knew how he really felt about Mir until those charming eyes were looking up at him from the hospital bed. Life takes an all too serious turn after their accident as Joon realizes he has fallen completely in love with his partner and will stop at nothing to see Mir's beautiful smile again.
There is a slight possibility this will become a three shot, although it depends on how in depth I go. It could very well be a short 5 chapter story WHO KNOWS but my intention is for it to be short, so I'd say 2-3 shots.
Foreword
The sound of screeching tires drowned out whatever Mir was going to say next, gravity flinging Joon out of the open door the minute their vehicle was impacted. He skidded across the slick road, jeans and jacket tearing from the roughness of the pavement as his body tumbled along with the lightness of a feather blowing carelessly through the wind. When he finally came to a stop he was toppled over on his stomach, skin burning like acid beneath fat droplets of rain which came cascading down without remorse.
He coughed, a wad of blood spewing freely to the ground as he cried out from the very pit of his stomach. His muscles burned, trails of blood seeping through the many cuts and jagged tears lining his now soaked body. It didn't matter, none of it really mattered, there was only one thing on his mind despite his agony. Joon struggled to lift his head, his stiffened neck held in place by his shattered shoulder bone which was jutting ruthlessly into his path of movement. A low growl escaped the honey-ab singer's throat, teeth bared in a menacing scowl as he cried out yet again, pushing himself up with all the might he had left in his shredded forearms. His vision was hazy, distorted first by the shower of rain and second by his tangled mess of hair dangling freely in his face.
Dark eyes hazed upon the vision of their smashed vehicle, crushed to pieces with remains of the on coming truck still attached to it, but that wasn't what caught Joon's attention. The passenger side door had torn off in the midst of the accident, catapulted across the street with a bone chilling clank. Looking into the small SUV Joon could see that Mir had fallen from the drivers seat, bowed over on the passenger side, copper locks muddled with the rapper's own blood in a disgustingly graphic tangle of a mess. He couldn't see the younger man's face, although he wasn't entirely certain he wanted to judging by what he could see. Mir's body was mangled, arm snapped in half and pressed against the dashboard as if he had tried to keep himself from flying out the window. His right arm was dangling outside of the vehicle, proof that Mir had indeed tried to shove Joon out despite the older man's confusion.
The crackle of thunder tearing through the night sky barely drowned out Joon's horrid cry of anguish, his sobs wracking loudly from a broken body now accompanied by a broken soul. He called for his lover but received no response, not even a grunt. Joon moved with the intention of getting up, only to collapse back to the ground with the surprise of learning he had broken his leg and most likely his forearm as well. He cursed loudly, rolling himself onto his side as best he could, ignoring the snaps and crunching he heard as a result. He was determined to reach Mir, launching his upper body across the road and slowly dragging his seemingly crippled legs to follow with an ear splitting scream. He stopped for a moment to catch his breath, aware that his vision was becoming clouded and that the taste of copper was once again pooling in his mouth.
Joon squeezed his eyes shut, rolling his head back and allowing himself to cry while his body begged him to be still and save what little strength he had left. A request he was unable to obey, gasping loudly as he crawled closer to the vehicle, limbs shaking so violently they threatened to give way at any minute. His senses failed him, eyes drooping shut beneath the pressure of his body shutting down just before he did indeed collapse, unable to move even an inch further. Silent tears spilled down his bloody cheeks as he realized the next time he opened his eyes he would be in a hospital, the sound of sirens blaring in the distance confirmation of this thought. He couldn't care less what happened to him after this, even if it meant he would be a vegetable forever Joon didn't care. He would give his life in an instant just to know that Mir would open his beautiful wide eyes again.
His hand flopped weakly over his heart, consciousness leaving him just after he mumbled "Cheolyong."
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ClaudineB on says about chapter 1:
This made me cry. Sob sob :(
innersense on says:
I can only think of MBLAQ's CRY. Baby you make me cry... TT.TT
more pleaseee :)
Lehcar_76 on says:
Foreword:
Love it. Kudos on each and every word used! Very dramatic! Looking forward into reading this story!
1:44am
Chapter One:
Ohhh. Such a perfect scene in the beach! <3 I've always dread to do that in the future, f course, with my husband/husband to be :D
I think there's a mistake in ". Their was a softness to Mir’s lips...". It's supposed to be 'there' right?
OMG OMG! >,< Waaaaaaah. Mir is so... thoughtful of Joon. He wanyed to save his lover by pushing him out of the car to prevent any more injuries </3 Waaaaaaaah! Only one chapter? Y U NO STOP TEASING ME? XD
2:14am (My sister's netbook crashed so this was a bit late.)
nakatsu_fin on says:
omg please update soon ;---; ♥♥
thenothingness on says:
I'm at a lose for words. I've read several Joomi stories with this kind of theme & I must say this one takes the cake. I am extremely impressed by your writing style. The level of detail is amazing. I could totally visualize everything as if I were there. I can't wait for the next chapter.
GenerationX on says:
Can't believe Rain is such an _____! How dare he blame it on poor Joonie who is already in such a painful state!
But I've got to say...you're so evil: you just let us hang on a cliff... I wanna know about Mir! Sounds like he's really hurt!:(
BluePhoenix on says:
Why does it seem as though there are a lot of stories where Rain is either just plain mean or doesn't like Mir? In any case, this is good so far and I'm looking forward to more.
Chococinna on says:
Oh gawd, I'm crying. You don't know how hard it is to read the whole accident. T_T
I can't believe Rain has some nerve to speak that way to joon, telling him that it was his fault when clearly he should be thankful that the both are still alive and okay.
leehongkifan1234 on says:
Im crying, today hasn't been that great.... *sigh* Now I read this and I'm bawling my eyes out, I actually like it when stories can do that to me, Just means your a really good author. Gosh I hate people like you made Rain in this story I seriously wanted so bad to just go in there and beat the hell out of him, You dont say "its your fault" when something like that happens. I've been in more than enough car accidents too. Im terrified when driving next to big trucks and stuff, makes me almost have a panic attack. Anyway, This is so good.
tiffany90 on says:
T_T Iam really sorry to hear that. It must be difficult for you abd how great you can make story about it to recall that you had been in accident before, it must be really uneasy. T_T
Yeah, being careful is not enough to prevent accidents, sometimes God has another plans that we have no control about it, then what we can do is just being carefull and pray right?T_T
my poor mireu, but Joon has suffered too. If I were him, and my boyfriend*cough* Mireu in that kind of state(*punched by miracles and a+), I might be crazy. T_T
I hope Mir will be okay.T_T
It's very sad and horrible. You can be just being happy and one second later, unpredictable horrible thing happens. so scary T_T
I hope this story will not have sad ending. But, since the title is "miracle", I hope not, but pleeeaaaassseee (OOT), don't make another stories esp " A Little Too Late" sad ending for JooMi,NOOOOOOOOOOOO,.. **crying over loud
#who am I? These stories are yours xD
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