Before U Come

Description

 

Once upon a time, there lived an unhappy young girl called Cinderella. Her mother was dead. Her father married a widow with two daughters. Her step-mother didn’t like her a bit. All her kind thoughts and loving touches were for her own daughter and for the poor unhappy girl, there was nothing at all. One day, a ball was held in the palace and every girl in the kingdom was allowed to go, except for Cinderella. She was sad and crying alone in her room until something magical happened. A Fairy Godmother appeared. She gave Cinderella, a beautiful carriage, a lovely dress and a pair of gorgeous slippers. At the ball, Cinderella met her Prince and felt in love at the first time but unfortunately, she had to go home before midnight when the magic started to wear out. Everything she left was a slipper. The Prince who was madly in love with her ordered any girl who fits this slipper will become his princess and determined to find the mysterious girl from last night. The Prince found her. They got married and lived happily ever after.

 

That’s an original story about Cinderella. But what will happen if the story doesn’t follow its own cliché?

 

What if the slipper didn’t drop?

 

What if the slipper disappeared along with the carriage, dress and everything?

 

What if Cinderella didn’t have the mice to help her out?

 

Or worse, what if the Fairy Godmother didn’t exist?

 

If all things above occurred,

 

What would happen to Cinderella?

 

Foreword

 

Hi, This is Lucia. I want to announce that this story will be earased because I will rewrite it. I have put up an announcement. I hope you will read it. the new one will be different to the old ones basically. I'll apologize to those who prefer the old one more. You can unsubscribe if you like but if you're interested in it, please stay with me :)

Thank you.

 

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DISCLAIMER:

They don't belong to me. They belong to themselves. I don't own anyone. (If I can, can I keep Tiffany?)

I only own the plot.

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The poster is produced by DJMushroom. A big thank to our talented girl ^^

 

 

LuciaLuu
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Comments

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Va_asianloverz
#1
Chapter 1: update soon please
damnsmurf
#2
what happen??
moshikyuna
#3
Chapter 13: Oh my gee! you're really great unnie
1st, your description of fany is so detailed, i love it^^
2nd, the argument of SiHa is so so so funny! you can really do comedies so funny.
3rd, you Include my favorites in this story^^ the shikshin couple, YoonSic, the best gamers, haesica and i really hope it's KyuNa^^

update soon unnie^^
-eirlys
#4
Chapter 13: new reader here! i love this!!!! siwon is so adorable!
and i love all the pairings<3
siwonAddicted
#5
Chapter 13: though i like both version, but i think the new story is more interesting than the previous version :)
update soooooooonnnnn!!!
twilight13
#6
Chapter 13: here, seem just donghae, the one who is normal haha XD
twilight13
#7
Chapter 12: so, i thought this re-write story more mature than the previous one. Keep going, u'r good indeed.
nerdscandy #8
Chapter 13: Yayyy changminnnn <3
clumsy_g
#9
Chapter 13: I like both (the old and the new version ^^)
spicastellar
#10
Chapter 13: ah by the way I like this version better, because 1. Your writing is smother, the words seems more fluid, it feels like you enjoy write this version.. 2. Your character is stonger, and livelier *isthataword*, and you build it step by step, slowly and nicely.