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by me143utaeminie
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Characters

you , sehun

Description

 

 

 

 

"She is my bestfriend"    

"He is my bestfriend"
 
 
"and i'm secretly in love with my bestfriend"
 
"and i'm secretly in love with my bestfriend"
 
 
 
 
 
 
-You grew up together and learned to keep secrets to each other , you help one another in times of weakness and hardships ... You promised that you will be friends till the end ... you both grew fond with one another ...and that's the time when "love" entered ... well it's not ordinary since your love for each other is filled with innocence and secrets for one another ....-

Foreword

 

 

-friendship is sure the best relationship.. and falling in love is the best feeling you could ever accept .. but would it be fine to fall in love with your your own friend .. well scrach that ... "with your own bestfriend"??-

 

 

 

 

 

Author's POV:

 

"~~-ah!! nnyeong!!" Sehun ran towards his bestfriend ...with the greatest smile he ever made .. "oh~ Sehunnie!! done with your practice?? " she asked him with a sweet smile "hmm~ nae~ "  "~~-ah .. begopa~ .. *pouts*" "aigoo~ .. poor bestfriend.. well i baked some cookies .. wanna eat it?? " "hmmm nae~" they headed towards the garden and seated behind the tree "here you go Sehunnie .. have some ^^".."nae~ kamsa.. ~~-ah" "hmm .. ~~-ah .. " "nae~??" "your cookies are delicious" "hahaha.. jinjja?? "

"nae~ that's why i love you !! *i hope she got what i said*"

"ohh~ .. haha.. I love you too Sehunnie..^^ * it's true i love so much*"

"uhm.. ~~-ah!.. i have something to ask"

"hmm~ go ahead"

" i have someone that i like *and it's you*"

"ohh~ jinjja?? nuguu?? *i hope it's me*" 

"hmm~ it's a secret for now *i'm too shy to tell it to you*" 

"hmm~ aigoo~ .. secret?? tss...*aigoo~ why not me ?? :(*" 

"should i tell her my feelings?? *should i tell you MY feelings ??*" 

"it's up to you *aigoo~ please don't i'll be hurt like hell TT^TT*"

 "she even told me that she loved me.. *you just said it a while ago*"

"ohh~ jinjjayo ?? then go tell her.. *ouch!!! Y_Y ...*"

"oh~ .. arraso !! ^^ *stands up and handed his hand infront of you*"

"wae??" 

" i need you  so that i can tell her my feelings*coz it's you whom i'll be confessing with*"..

"arraso *ouch confessing infront of me to anther girl OTL (stands up) *"

Sehun kneeled down and held your hand

" ~~-ah!! i know your my bestfriend , we grew up together ,your my secret keeper , my supporter,my nagger, my air,my water,my earth,my life,my world and my LOVE ... will you accept my feelings for YOU ?? " 

 

 

[a/n: i'll hang you there .. wahahahahahah... mian .. kekeke.. 

 

please support my ff .. well this is my promised gift for my friend .. hehehe.. ^^

hmm~ please don't criticize me guys ..since i know i'm never good ..but i always do my best ^^ ... your comments and subscribes are best appraciated and would make me more motivated ^^ ..kamsa .. ^^ ]


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exoshineelove0508  on says:
TT.TT Mag update ka na baklaaa~
Ay Pulalabs Your Storya <3

sehunality  on says:
pls update soon!!!!

kazeryu23  on says:
Chapter one's nice. Just pretty short, I guess.
But I like the idea that Sehun really cares for her. :">
I mean, he's sweet and lovable~~ :3

on the side note, again, I'd prefer it if you didn't use caps lock for the whole chapter. It seems as if the scene is tensed and all that. And there are some misspelled words. Just check them twice. :)

jellielove  on says:
AWESOME!! Update soon! :]]

kazeryu23  on says:
Hello!
Just finished reading your foreword and I think that this'll be interesting! Though, since the plot's pretty cliched, I believe that you'll be including twists within the story soon. :)
oh, and I think that it'll look less cluttered if you'd put it this way:
"Oh~ Sehunnie!! Done with your practice?" she asked him with a sweet smile.
He nodded like a kid. "Hmm~ Nae!"

(or something like that.)

instead of:
"oh~ Sehunnie!! done with your practice?? " she asked him with a sweet smile "hmm~ nae~ " he nodded like a kid

This is just a suggestion chingu. It's still up to you whether change it or not. :)

Off to reading chapter one! ^^

me143utaeminie [A]  on says:
waaaah~... mukhang ... mag uupdate ako ..wahaha..pero d pa sure yun ..wahahahahaha ^^

cutieangel806  on says:
EXCITED KO KUNG UNSA'Y SUNOD! NEXT CHAPTERRRR! HAHAHAHA! XDv

anneeeyyyy  on says:
SUBSCRIBED !

ang ganda ng foreword... tae, super excited na ko...
Go sehunnie! kaya mo yan!
and ate ang swerte mo, in love sa'yo si sehun >_<


hwaiting~~~

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