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The Fire-Safe Completed!
by missterious
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MissTER, Zhe Qiao (Chiao) ~ this is implied CHILK aka Chiao + Milk/Niu Nai (using her given name Yi Xuan)
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Friendship.
Keepsakes.
Sadness.
Bittersweet endings.
And letting go.
A/N: This was made on the spur of the moment - it just came to me and I had to pump it out all at once.
I submitted this to the Write Like The Wind challenge. Prompt #62: Composure. 966-word one-shot. Officially my SHORTEST fic ever :)
Stock in my poster taken from http://dryicons.com
Foreword
"You'll find the key to the fire-safe between the box-spring and the mattress," she said. For a moment, she laughed and closed her eyes over some memory she was revisiting.
I knew what she wanted to do.
She wanted it so much; it wasn't my place to stop her.
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LeopardGun on says:
This story was short, too short, yet it was undeniably fascinating. :)I wish I could write like you, my angst feelings are so far away from me now(damned writer's block).
Though, I wished you could have expanded the story better. Your writing is really good. ^^
soupah on says about chapter 2:
What Kautype said :)
SEQUEL!!!
KauType on says:
I'd love to learn what Chiao was feeling - why she wanted to end everything.
kangalee on says:
T^T No! So sad!
It was so simple, and lovely. Although, it was horrible. haha.
I loved it, by the way! :)
missterious [A] on says:
@cutie: oh, but WAS it unrequited? ;)
cutiepiehunter on says:
Aww unrequited love. Sniff. Gah!
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