Captured Silence

Description

He hides behind an abandoned alley way, hidden beneath the downtown city lights of Seoul. He waits for her to walk down the street, going to the exact dance studio at the exact place and at the exact time. And as he waits and waits and waits for the familiar figure to pass by, he readies his equipment of choice. He would have to be prepared to take the shot. 

She passes by, he takes a snap.


He's decides for her to be his new model of choice.

 

His new target.

Foreword


She was already dead the moment she met him.

The moment she met L. Joe.
 


 

This story is an entry to Ai-Rinnie's Just Smile━ writing contest.
 
I chose MV prompt #4: Jay Park - Girlfriend.
 
Review 1 | 2
 
This story is quite different from the music video, as you can already tell. I'm trying to sway away from writing an exact replica of the music video and portraying it the way I see fit. I hope you enjoy this story! 

 
Credits to Christy from Paranoia Graphics Studio for the graphics. Oh my god, why do I find it so ironic that the owner is requesting from her own graphic shop? Well, because it is!
 
keena-choding
the poster finally arrived. ^^

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LocketKay
#1
Chapter 9: Wow. This was really good!
I love stories like this.
&& I liked your long authors note at the end. Explaining kinda like the background of L.Joe. Hah. :)
didzzz #2
Chapter 4: This is my first time reading this genre of fanfic....
It was refreshing and i liked it though
it was kinda confusing (?).

Thumbs up!
Lollie
#3
L.Joe is a crazy freak(crazy freak? lol whatever). I think you made a good choice in giving L.Joe this character since his face looks like one, actually. And yeah, Myungsoo too. I suddenly think that how would it be if L.Joe and Myungsoo team up as freaks doing these and those weird things together hahahah the two freaking handsome and.. freaking freak. (if only you get what I mean) XD

And oh! I think the Author's Note is more like an epilogue... or not. Haha btw I just knew that if a story is over 25,000 words it's considered as a novel. :O
Just like the other comments below, I, too, wish you win the contest. you deserve it :D
--potato
#4
this is the iest ____ ever.
you're so awesome at writing this,
gosh♡
AverageCupOfTea
#5
i can never look at jay park's girlfriend MV ever the same LOOL but wow this is really a great fic you have here :D good luck on the writing contest~~
chubbyturtle
#6
You should write more stories like this!
I won't be surprised if you win c;
namnamangel
#7
Indescribable. #speechless. This. Is. Amazing. It a heck a lot different than the stories out there. It's the type to make me continue reading. And i'm here to review it! Time to reread the story to give you your review LOOOOL(x
Deewlici0us
#8
...
Whoa.
That was... wow. I'm speechless. I really hope you'll win the contest. The idea is really original and I find nothing cliché in this. There is... no words to describe how well you wrote this. Omg, two thumbs up!
You're so good :D