Drinks over Bullets

Description

One explosion had started it all. With a love kept secret apparently out in the open, this 'secret' lover finds himself in a whirlwind of lies, deceit and revenge.

Foreword

The sound of three quick steps met his ears. He only had time to glimpse the hard look on his lover's face before the world whipped around and went dark. The sudden movement stole his breath away, and a hand automatically reached up to latch onto the leathered one over his eyes. The fingers tightened their hold over the top half of his face and the sickly familiar click of a gun's safety pierced the sudden black.

Gackt's voice trickled into his ear a harsh whisper.

"Don't say a word."

 

ThatOneOtherWriter
Currently working on a new chapter for you all. Thanks for sticking with me thus far

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Amalya
#1
Chapter 4: Yay! *flails* I do so enjoy this story. ^_^ The comedic exchanges between everyone in the bar always have me highly amused and I seriously laughed out loud this time. hehe This is turning into a very interesting love triangle thing so far and that's not even including Gackt yet. I wonder what he would have to say... >.> Whatever happens, it is entertaining, to say the least, watching Kris trying to control himself, and pour Chanyeol pining off to the side. The god-sent comment was hilarious though!

As usual, I loved Reita. He doesn't say much but when he does, oh goodness. And his exchanges with Ruki continue to delight (possibly far more than they should). I really enjoyed your showing us some of Chanyeol's thoughts this time too. It was interesting to get a handle on his perspective.

Insofar as Hikaru is concerned, you have me intensely curious as to what she's up to. Kudos for the undercover disguise and that was marvelous with the sock prop for her bun too. Brilliant! I can only imagine she has a rather large handbag... O.o Kind of nice to have something you can fit everything in though. haha

Wonderful update and very much looking forward to the next one. Dammit Jun Ki! Get some rest or something! ;)
-Angela-Zhang-
#2
Chapter 3: Another fantastic chapter!!
I love how Gackt is with his "Little Love"; so cute! (o^^o)
Your writing is, once again, a stand-out and I love this chapter especially for the teasing little bits of Gackt/Jun Ki romance. I have a feeling that you're just getting started with those two...^^~
Your story comprises quite a captivating roster of characters, too- I'm very interested to see how their roles will intertwine throughout the story and certainly, I'm on the edge of my seat for the full spectrum of Gackt's so far seemingly discrete love for Jun Ki ^^
Amalya
#3
Chapter 3: Bahaha! That ending was priceless this chapter. ^_^ And I definitely loved that little bit of insight into Gackt's character and how he feels for Jun Ki.

The newest characters you've introduced are interesting thus far and I am disinclined to like Hikaru based on principle. >.> Good character though and I think I shall enjoy Takamasa and his development. The conversation between him, his father and Gackt early on was wholly entertaining too. Loved it!

As always, the descriptions are phenomenal and the story itself is gripping (even if I do get a little bit lost with some of the Japanese dialogue). Well done and definitely looking forward to more.
Malane #4
Chapter 1: lovee...... *-*
Amalya
#5
Chapter 2: I'm inclined to agree with -Angela-Zhang- in that there is definitely a certain class and elegance to your writing. The words flow smoothly on the page and the story is already quite engaging. I am intrigued by the Jun Ki and Gackt pairing as much as I am interested in Kris' interest in the bartender as well and Reita fascinates me.

The characters come to life beautifully and, true to form, your descriptions are spot on and ever a joy to read. I am apparently officially hooked and will be waiting for your next update! Huzzah! ^_^
-Angela-Zhang-
#6
Another great chapter! :) Each word was clearly chosen with care and purpose- something that I love about your stories ^^

I'm just a little confused with the characters...
So, Owner G is Jun Ki, right? And Nii-sama is...Hyde? And Min Gi is...not Reita, right? ^^' hehe~ It's not your fault, it's just the "code names" threw me off a little, if you don't mind helping me out ^^~
-Angela-Zhang-
#7
Fantastic work :)
Your writing is so vivid- I've said it before and I'll say it again- your stories are like watching a movie. There's a certain class and elegance in your writing that makes your style very distinct ^^
oh poor Jun Ki!!! T-T aww... He misses Gackt and Gackt's not contacting him :(
I like Reita's involvement here, too. Very fitting as Gackt's almost right hand man ^^
this is great- I think this is my favorite of all your stories :D
-Angela-Zhang-
#8
Awesome!
Glad to see more of this pairing and it's yakuza :D