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Our love Completed!
by ellis-ester
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yunjae
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kim jaejoong,jung yunho,park yuchun,kim junsu and shim changmin of tvxq/dbsk/thsk
Description
This is a YUNJAE story...!!
I'm writing this story of YUNJAE because i love Yunjae....
I'm trying to tell a bit of their story..so i'm basing on some real events...and i'm giving my interpretation of what may could had happened in their real lifes....
Please comment if you like the story...give me any suggestions to improve my way of writing and tell me what you think about...
Fic number: 1
Thank you very much for the beatiful poster AngelTaoris...
Thank you jessicamaylee for your help...
Who wants to request here you can find the link of the shop..^__^
I'm really sorry for all the grammar errors that i make..it's because...
1)English isn't my native language and i'm still learning it at a normal school so the level it's not high..
2)When i write i'm totally immersed in what i'm writing and i'm imagining and preparing in my head all what i write so i'm not aware of all the mistakes i do because i'm really focused in other things...so i guess i can call all these mistakes as attention mistakes...but i hope anyway the content is understandable....
+nod nod+ I know i know..i'm really sorry but i'm a lazy ass... Z____Z
Sooooooooooooooooooo....what have i to say more.....well...
ENJOY...!!!
YUNJAE IS THE BEST...!!!
YUNJAE FIGHTING...FOREVER LOVE...!!!
TVX(5)Q I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....I LOVE ALL FIVE OF YOU....SOOOOOOO DBSK FIGHTING.... ALWAYS KEEP THE FAITH...!! <3
Foreword
The charahters are:All DBSK members...
OUR LOVE....can a love overcome everything...?? can a love survive above everything..above all the difficulties that life brings to their lifes... will be YUNJAE's love a forever love...??
Personally i believe in YUNJAE's love and everyday i can see it even if they're apart...i can see it well how much they truly love eachother and T____T how much they're suffering now..but i'm a Cassie so i'll always keep the faithe that one day everything will be alright again because they'll be together again...all five of them together again..happily is the bigest dream of every TRUE Cassie...
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Bangster90 on says:
Love the story! It felt so real! There was a lot of real emotions in this story. I loved how you portrayed each character very well and how they would of felt during the separation.
gothchicz on says about chapter 12:
like the story..but i found so many typos...and the annotations...kinda suggest u to hire a beta though...but great story anyways..thanks xD
genglan84 on says:
I like the story...
But I think you need to put punctuation mark in every talking to make reader not confuse...
But for all great..
Keep writing...
Alessia-chan on says about chapter 12:
OMG, you make me cry, you know?? reading this last chapter was amazing. I really loved it. I've cried a lot T__T
You have the ability to convey feelings to the readers for real!!!
I loved all the story and I loved the way it ends!
the smut is superb, very exciting and very romantic! *_____*
Love it a lot <3 <3 <3 <3
yunvin2105 on says:
hello! i like your background picture~ where did you get it?
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yunjaemrcnn on says:
finally they told ecahother these three magic words!
Elisabeth on says:
Away with you, girlfried! Go for Joongie, Yunho! :D Sweet!!
Elisabeth on says:
Ah, the very beginning - sounds niiiice until now! :) Please keep going! *bookmark*
By the way, it would be a little easier to read if you used quote signs / some capital letters ...:)
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