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Break My Heart in Two
by itchysocks
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yoonhyun
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Yoona believes in romance and the concept of soul mates. She thinks Seohyun is the only one for her, but all that changes when she is diagnosed with a life-threatening condition. The first person she confesses the problem to is Yuri, her old college roommate. What she doesn't know is that Yuri has lingering feelings for her. When Yuri hears about her dire situation, she makes it her mission to help Yoona live her life to the fullest before the operation.
On the other hand, no matter how hard Yoona tries, she can't bear to tell Seohyun the cold hard truth of her condition. Still, Yoona demands more from Seohyun, who has been too focused on her work and not on her. She gives her an ultimatum - show me you care or else I'll leave - which Seohyun hears loud and clear.
As time passes, Yoona starts to realize that like life - love is never so simple. Curveballs are always thrown your way when you least expect it. Her relationship with both Yuri and Seohyun complicates matters as time passes and her condition worsens.
Foreword
This is essentially a YoonYul & YoonHyun on-going that will only go about 10 chapters.
It's a drama/romance.
Credits to Ace @ Artision (Artision.com)!
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pre0611 on says about chapter 1:
im obsessed with yoonhyul fanfic lawl, hope you update all of your fics cause its deadly awesome :)
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Melonhead on says:
I'm not going to subscribe since I don't exactly need the alerts but I am going to comment. ^^
It's a typical noncommunication relationship between Yoonhyun and because of that, it'll always bring some drama in the story. Seohyun...it's obvious that she only means good. She wants to build a solid ground for both her and Yoona but that causes Yoona to feel alone and she misunderstands. I really like the reality between them. You portayed something that happens in real life and it makes it really touching and bittersweet to read. The divorce papers broke my heart and because it's coming from Yoona...it hurts even more. I'm really interested to see what comes of Yoonhyun. For some reason, I can really see Yoona to be the lonely type and Seohyun to be the almost clueless one. Seohyun's blinded and all Yoona wants is her love and attention.
Yoonyul...I'm not excatly into the coupling since I've always seen it to be forced and well, not at all romantic lol. In my opinion, Yoonyul seems like the dork best friend/sisterly type; someone they can both rely on. But because I think of Yoonyul this way, I have a feeling Yuri will become someone Yoona starts to rely on in this story to cope with her loneliness and Yoona will slowly become attached to finding comfort in Yuri. I can really see this type of connection in Yoonyul but never romance. I'm very curious.
Yoona's disease...I'm anxious.
The first chapter is amazing and even though it's short, I think that was the perfect lenghth to put it at. Keep up with the good work! (:
Michael_Angelo on says:
NONONONONONO Why are did you end there?! Stop torturing me! ;A;
I have hope for YoonHyun though ultimately, I think YoonYul will trump over the former. Just by that brief indirect characterization of Yuri, I can already tell Yoona has a lot more in common with her than Seohyun. Opposites may attract but we always stick with what's similar and familiar.
And it's not a comment from me if there isn't a favorite quote section ;D
"I make things complicated because I love you" ;A;!!!
Can I spazz some more?! I feel Yoona's pain!
I LOVE YOU BUT WHY MUST YOU MAKE THINGS COMPLICATED BY MAKING 3 AWESOME YOONHYUN ON-GOINGS?!
You should really think about moving this to SSF. I think you'll get more readers and therefore, (hopefully) extra motivation when you need it <3 But even if you didn't have any, you bet your a** i'll be here motivating you all the way until you finish this amazing piece ;A;
jinyuan on says:
Eh, Yoona has a disease? :(
Oh, it seems Seohyun is busy and really touchy here about the wine. But Yoona was at fault too bcos she didn't ask to take the wine.
So it's Yoonhyun or YoonYul huh? Well, I do hope to see Seohyun take a break from her never-ending work. I mean, relations between people are more important than careers and salaries.
Yea, and I love to read any story from you! ^^
Shall not rush you haha :)
yoonpair on says:
another fic from u!!! i love Chasing Miss Innocent..and i'm sure i'll enjoy this one as well!!!
i want YoonHyun!!!!
YoonHyunshidae on says:
OMGGGGGGGGG this is sooooooooooo scary
and EIPICC!!!!
WAHHHHH update soon!
I got so scared at the divorce paper scene!
>_< poor yoongie
Michael_Angelo on says:
OMG HOW THE CRAP DID I NOT SEE THIS SOONER. THIS IS THE ULTIMATE TRIANGLE. AH Yuri my former bias vs. Seohyun, my current bias...No, I can't choose ;A; Oh wait, it's Yoona that's gonna be doing all the choosing. Thank God 'cause that's one hell of a difficult choice. So YoonHyun are already together from what I can tell. So Yoona feels neglected...they must already be past the honeymoon stage...literally? OMG they're not married are they? That would make things a helluva lot more complicated! L:JFIOEPJFI Stop coming up with awesome plots! Not only am I anxious for CMI and Possession updates, now I gotta add BMHIT!
chyan01 on says:
mwooh !! I like it ! YoonHyun !! Although it seems this story will torture me because it'll involve YoonYul much, and from your description, Hyunnie will rather careless to Yoongie because of her work. Ouchh.........so chaotic. T__T
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