Deceivious Immortalis

Description

Story Information;

Title: Deceivious Immortalis
Featuring: Infinite's Woohyun, Hoya, & Myungsoo, EXO's Suho, and Beast's Doojoon
Genre: Historical-Fiction w/ a hint of Modern-day.
No. of main characters: 5

Goddesses;

Woo Na Young || 우나영

The 'Mother'

- Goddess of Magic, Witchcraft, Moon, Ghosts, and the Night (Hecate)
- Love Interest: Suho - God of Sea (Poseidon)

 

Hwang Mi Rae || 황미래

The Clumsily Graceful

- Goddess/Muse of Song (Aoide)
- Love Interest: Lee Howon [Hoya] - God of War (Ares)

 

Kang Eun Jung || 강은정

The Prideful

- Goddess of Marriage & Women (Hera)
- Love Interest: Nam Woo Hyun - God of Sky, Weather, Thunder, Lightning. Ruler of Mount Olympus. King of Gods. (Zeus)

 

Moon Jae Won || 문재원

The Vampire

- Primordial Goddess of the Night (Nyx)

- Love Interest: Doojoon - God of Music, Sun, Prophecies (Apollo)

 

Baek Soo Yun || 백수연

The Choding

- Goddess of Spring
- Love Interest: Kim Myungsoo [L] - God/Ruler of the Underworld & Hidden Wealth (Hades)

 

✿ Plot;

In a land where everything is peaceful, lay 5 fair goddesses on a grassy hill.
They giggle and chat with one-another, admiring the scenery and fluffy white clouds. Their lives feel so perfect.. as if nothing could go wrong.
But boy, are they wrong.. Soon, their sisterly bonds break because 5 handsome gods enter their picture-perfect life.
As the girls struggle to find their perfect partner, they watch as they betray eachother for the sake of finding love.
Now there's only one question left in their minds..
Is this worth it..?

 

Previews;

"How could you, eonni..?" the girl could barely whisper. Tears streaming down her face, she couldn't believe that her own best friend would betray her like this.

The older girl adverted her gaze, unable to look into the latter's eyes, "You were taking him away.. I couldn't let you do that."
The sobbing girl on the ground stood up; anger and hurt in her eyes couldn't be concealed. 

"Taking him away?! You chose him over me?! We had a friendship like no other in this kingdom! I threw away everything for you and this is what you repay me with?!" the younger fiercely fought back.
Unable to apologize, the older could only turn her back and walk away. Not a single tint of regret flashed in her eyes as she left the younger to fall back to the ground and continue crying.

- - - - - - - -

"What are you talking about?! I didn't do it!" the female ruthlessly lied, her eyes never leaving the other girl's gaze.

The female standing in front of her gazed at the other female with pleading eyes, "Then tell me.. Who did..?"

Making up another lie, the latter pointed at another female in the distance, "She did."

"Don't lie to me. There's no way she would've done it! We're like sisters.. she would never betray me.."

"I'm not lying! I really didn't do it!" she deliberately tried to defend herself, "She girl did it! I saw it with my own eyes."

The female's eyes widened and she felt all the air in her lungs fly out as she managed to studder, "Y-y-you.. saw h-her d-d-do it...?"

The latter nodded, "She didn't even hesitate to.. I couldn't see a speck of loyalty in her eyes."
The girl stumbled backward, ready to collapse as she took in deep breaths, *This isn't happening.. There's... there's.. no way.. She wouldn't..*
A small smirk appeared on the other girl's face as she caught the weak goddess right before she could fall, *You're too gullible, darling.. Much too gullible.*

Foreword

As you guys can probably tell already, even if you're an accepted applicant and your character is very nice, I'll have to make her into a bad person later on, sorry!

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jelobaby
#1
Chapter 15: aaaaa welcome back~!
reading this, i got a grasp that jaewon is the most mature among all the main goddesses. btw have been watching iris2 lately and i was really enjoyed seeing doojoon here~ c:

and yepppp the names;
aphrodite: gyuri
demeter: gayoon
athena: bora
artemis: yuri
hermes: baekhyun
dionysus: leejoon
hephaestus: gikwang
wonpokemon
#2
Chapter 15: haha... at least Doojoon and Jaewon had a calm conversation. XD
wonder if Daniel will be seen as an obstacle for Doojoon if he wants to pursue after Jaewon~ lol

as for names

Aphrodite - Tiffany
Demeter - Bom
Athena - Boa
Artemis - Gina
Hermes - Eunhyuk
Dionysus - Jonghyun
Hephaestus - Taemin
wonpokemon
#3
Chapter 14: bwhaha, i can't believe i missed this chapter in a an update! :O
but lol, Mirae doesn't believe in the powers of the faith and destiny gods. xD
wonder how things will turn out like when Hoya realize it's Mirae. :O
sweetlollie #4
Chapter 15: HI ! WELCOME BACK !
I missed this story so much ~
Back in the days when we were all applying. HAHAHAHA

Well some suggestions:
Aphrodite - Taehee
Demeter - Solbi
Athena - Eunhye
Artemis - Yerin
Hermes - Minjun
Dionysus - Seungwon
Hephaestus - Seungjae

Sorry for the totally random names :L Those were the only names that popped into my head. ^^"
jelobaby
#5
Chapter 14: WELCOME BACK!!
well it's a welcome for me too since i have been hiatus for a reallyyyy long time...
sorry for not have been in touch and yessssss, you're updated!
happy new yearrrrrr~ //late.

anw back to the story.
bomi is so clueless here, and mirae so awkward... i think they can be a better duo rather than chorong-bomi! loool XD
hoya always looks so strong but he ends up desperately search for a woman :p
and i love how you put a comedic scene at every end of the chapter~
looking forward to your more updates!
loveeeeee it <333333
tealcloud
#6
Chapter 14: Welcome back~ Good to see you back ^^
Made me jump out of my seat when I saw this updated
Oh Mirae trying to not let Hoya find out it was her...Ohoho let's see how long that lasts =DD
sweetlollie #7
Chapter 14: OMFG. WELCOME BACK !
You have no idea how long I was waiting for this story to be updated ! ㅠ^ㅠ
Thanks so much for coming back !
hahaha So Christmas miracles do happen !
by the way !
MERRY CHRISTMAS ! ^-^
Thanks for this awesome chapter ~
I look forward to your future updates ~
<3
tealcloud
#8
LOL!!! strike of the namgrease.
Yeah, go Eunjung use that broom.
Love how this turned out. Very entertaining to read XD~