Break Throughs ~[Part One]~
by Daisy_Blue
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JR Ren MinHyun Aron BaekHo Starr Amber
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". . . Action, this ain't a movie . . ."
". . . Raw, true, the real me . . ."
". . . Pressed down on all fours . . ."
"Fight back, the world,
it's yours."
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My sister. My brother. My best friends.
The boy I fell in love with. My first love. Can I hold on any tighter? If I do he might melt like snow and slip through my fingers. Fingers which had threaded themselves through his countless of times.
Or should I loosen my hand, let his butterfly wings expand, and let his delicate life take flight?
The boy who fell in love with me. Who I turned away but still hurt for. My dear friend – or my enemy?
And what of my family, the one that I adopted into my heart, into the ingrains of my lifestyle, into the fabric of my timeline?
Three months that bloomed and blossomed and flowered – it's only expected that the petals would fall sooner than later, even as I had wished for the latter. Truthfully, I pushed the notion away entirely. I hoped that it would always be springtime for this bliss.
I'm sixteen. I'm only starting out. When I felt the current of freedom, saw the barrier of the canal lifted, knew that I was about to be let free into the ocean of experience and knowledge that I craved, I propelled myself at full speed out of the hands that had graciously and gently lowered me into the forgiving water. My parents.
Why did I start out so fast?
If I hadn't, would I have ended up with my dear friend who fell in love with me? The one who probably shouldn't be so dear to me?
If I hadn't, would I have loved her and her and him and that person over there?
If I hadn't,
If I hadn't
. . . would I have been happy?
Would he?
But most importantly, would SHE even be someone left for me to envision in the future?
Foreword
Hey everyone! First off, I want to thank you profusely for picking Break Throughs to read. I love to write and I hope to be a famous bestselling author. I'm currently writing several stories but I've never finished an entire story from start to finish. I think my problem is that I overthink every detail of the story in my head before it gets a chance to be on paper. By the time I try to type it out I just can't.
But I sincerely hope that I will finish this story all the way through. I think my motivation would be my readers. If all you great people would support me with comments and brutal honesty it would help me a whole lot. I don't mind critics; everyone has opinions and tastes. But when I say 'brutally honest' I mean honest opinions - not mean jabs at me and my story. Also, comment if I have a typo, please.
This is about and American girl who meets NU'EST on her sixteenth birthday. It's also a JR romance and a Ren romance <3 Thank you so much! I really hope you like this story. THIS IS FOR ALL NU'EST FANS! > w <
Enjoy!
P.S., I realized that I have a lot of views but not many subscribers. I figured it's because the story seems a bit slow in the beginning; PLEASE read on. After the first five chapters or so (or even before that), it gets fun, funny, and interesting. I have some readers who are very enthusiastic about my story, so PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE?
TANK CHUUUUU~~
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ASaranghae on says:
WHAT? YOU CAN'T, NO. I JUST SPENT THE PAST FOUR HOURS READING IT. T-T
IT IS SO GOOD.
WAE. WAE. -sobs-
rosebub6200 on says:
I AGREE WITH EVERYTHING YOU SAID! lol
'This isn't the pillow i wanted hyung!'
and where those really disguises? Ren can't blend in to save his life
they were hovering in the air for an hour because they couldn't land- i was freaking out!!!
Cotton on says:
Sasaengs. They're everywheeeeer. ;a;
I hope NU'EST is okay though, even with the typhoon and stoof. Hwaiting!
I hope all the idols in Korea are okay...LOL OTL And the normal people too.
Shipperrr on says:
What I'm hoping: They bring NU'EST and Amber and they beat the ____ out of them.
@ediblep4nts: I was thinking like you too xD To track down her number...
ediblep4nts on says:
Why don't they just go to the police, call that number, track down velvet's phone, and QUESTION THE SHIZ OUTTA HER?!?
Srri, I've been watching too many crime shows....
Cotton on says:
Chapter 41: omgomgomgognsjbcejs. Just blow me away woth your writing why don't you. .x. Making my day and all.
Hfhhdjedif I HOPE THEY BRING NU'EST SO DAVE REALIZES HOW AWESOME THEY ARE...;_____;
IwishIcoulshelpthemfightVelvet. She so ebhil.
Cotton on says:
Chapter 40 was...Amazing. I don't even know; I'm speechless. So well-written and just shfheja.
AND ARON WAS FINALLY NICE!
But Dave...Waeeee. ;-;
EverythingMeans-- on says:
O________________________o this update gave me the heebie jeebies yet it's so intriguing...UPDATE SOON :D
SooHaPark715 on says:
Oooh, is David finally siding with Nu'est? Cuz I swear, some of that ____ that he said about them wuz uncalled for and makes me wanna beat his motha ******* a$$ and smack some goddam sense into him. >;/
Shipperrr on says:
This seriously made me feel sad...
I agree with David, though. Starr should of told someone about what she saw, but what's done is done. I hope that Juliet is fine, and that somehow Starr's theories are JUST theories.
Great chapter :)
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