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Breathe Me Completed!
by Malkom
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Onew Key Taemin Minho Jonghyun
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Perfect was the last thing Onew was.
The lifestyle, the parties, the drugs, the friends.
He worked so hard to build a world that finally accepted him.
What will he do when his younger brother, Taemin comes into that world
and flips everything upside down?
Foreword
“You like him…”
“Shut up, Taemin.”
“You like him,” Taemin repeated.
“No, I don’t.”
“Yes you do! If you didn’t, you wouldn’t be so threaten about having me around. You wouldn’t be so jealous whenever we hang out! Admit it, Onew! You like Minho!”
“Alright, okay?! Yes, I like him! I would’ve been dating him if it wasn’t for you! I would’ve been someone in mom and dad’s eyes if it weren’t for you! Everything is about you! I hate you!”
“You don’t mean that, hyung.”
“…Yes I do.”
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KuraiA on says about chapter 12:
ontae never makes up, 2min bitterly breaks apart and onkey lives happily ever after. hate 2min, i don't know why i read this... but besides that the writing was superb. very to the point, no dilly-dallying but emotionally descriptive where needed...cool
that is all..... have a nice day =)
-Forever2NE1- on says about chapter 12:
No sequel? But what about Onew and Taemin? What about Onew and Key?
VIPrimShAplus on says about chapter 12:
omg!!! Key you're so so so good person.. onew ah~ please take care of him from now.. Love!!!
kimmiko on says about chapter 12:
thank you. just. thank you. <3
Waterloosunset on says about chapter 12:
It's 3 in the morning and i'm just bawling. I'm hurting so much for Jinki, and Kibum. sdfhsuighufgi /sobs/ kibum,love, help heal jinki, and jinki heal kibum. i don't even know anymore ;~~~~; this was really good, and the story was well written and it made me feeeel pain. ;n;
DarknessDragon on says:
Sequel, please, author-nim. :3
Shining_Sunny on says:
sequeeeel please~
b2astly on says:
i must agree... this demands a sequel!! >.<
Koalaber on says:
What a beautiful ending! I'm hoping for a sequel. OnKey for the win :))))
Panical_love on says:
Poor Onew! His dad is an _____. but omg...ur like the best writer ever....
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