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choright  on says about chapter 1:
short and bitter-sweet.
i enjoye it.

mefika  on says:
this is what we call bittersweet memory...;)

Lattice  on says:
Beautifully written. Thank you so much for this story :)

hae_ki  on says:
it gives off a bittersweet feel. and... it's just too good :3

xuanmiin  on says:
You are seriously a wonderful writer. And I loved how you captured the "can't live with yet can't live without" feeling beautifully. Bittersweet especially cause it's obvious they love each other yet they just clash on so many different levels that it just doesn't work :( Lovely.

missrahx  on says:
Wow, I love this! The writing is beautiful and sad…sequel? xD

shu_dadot  on says:
wae ?? very short !! but very interesting .. HWAITING !!

236birdie  on says:
This is beautiful. I'm hoping for a sequel but this is good enough :)

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