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'Golden Mary' Completed!
by minifantasy
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mystery
seohyun
siwon
victoriasong
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Victoria, Seohyun, Luhan, Donghae, Siwon
Description
Woohoot! A challenge from Toria101! I'm so excited, I have something to look forward to! It's amazing how fast my brain works at the last minute xDD
***Characters are mine, this is all from my imagination. I'm only borrowing images and names, no other intention.
***f.y.i. I haven't checked out Exo yet, honestly. I feel too old and too tired to check any new groups out, so I don't know anything about the members from Exo. If you don't like the image I give Luhan, I'm not apologizing.
***The forewords may change in the future
Foreword
Characters (I would prefer you to find out about the characters themselves when you read the story):
Victoria
Seohyun
Luhan
Siwon
Donghae
Synopsis:
Two trained government agents have been sent out on a mission to retrieve the stolen 'Golden Mary'. During this same time police officer, Choi Siwon, is also on the move in search of a thief whose face he only knows by a sloppy sketch drawn out by an amateur artist. This thief, Lee Donghae, overhears Victoria and Seohyun's conversation about a 'Golden Mary' and assumes that it's a priceless ancient treasure which he can sell for millions. While following them fate only has it that his path would collide with police officer, Choi Siwon. And along this journey, a kid out of nowhere appears in Victoria and Seohyun's mission. When they all run into each other one by one confusion slides and hearts become full of lust. Will they all forever end up lying to each other? Can the 'Golden Mary' be retrieved?
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Tzarista on says about chapter 43:
i guess not all endings are happy, this proves to be another that is not. the rest is left to our imagination ...
thank you for the story
Tzarista on says about chapter 30:
arr, why are they all making it hard on themselves !!!!!
Tzarista on says about chapter 22:
the poor characters they always have a messed up life, never a happy memory...
elizabethmumu on says:
New reader here!! It's weird cus I read almost all ur other fits except for this one
LeeSHaRQZ_Hsu on says about chapter 43:
Re-read again and still fall to Luhan & Victoria. Lol!! Ah, really miss this story..
Tinywings on says:
I read the first two chapters, and it has gottenme hooked :D! It's so good and you've mde their encounter so... I don't even know how to describe it, but it's brilliant! :D Donghae still remains the character I want to know more about, though Luhan's appearance obviously raises questions. I'll be commenting again when I'm finished! :D
Irina98 on says:
Can't help but to cry at Vic's part T.T
I still remember the day I came across this fic and stayed up until ,like, 5 in the morning just to catch up to your latest chapter
I did not regret it. I'm very grateful to have come across this story.
I really admire you and your writing skills.
And, if not the best, you're one of my favourite authors in AFF ><
Though, felt sad at Donghae's death. He may start out as a criminal, but in the end, he's the true hero.
dennise09 on says:
Hello!! A silent reader here. Kekeke.. Sorry. But here i am commenting to congratulate you on writing another great story. Thank you!!
My favorite character was Luhan. I think he was the one who really deserved to find the key. He worked hard for it. Not that Victoria and Seohyun didn't. It's just that for me he gave his all in finding that key. He is also a good friend. He's there when Vic even Seo needed him.
I also liked the part where Victoria broke down. Because she needed it. It's a way to lessen the burden she felt. I am sad that Donghae died. Although i am not a fan of sad endings but I think it was the perfect way to end this story. Overall, I am very happy that I have read this fanfic! Good job!! Thank you!! =)
JT0912 on says:
I knew I had to cry to the end... I think my heart shuttered a thousand times more than Victoria did. It hurts to see my favorite character not pulling through till the end. I woke up for class, now I have to go eyes all buffy. Aside from his death, I guess the story does have a happy ending at least for Siwon and Seohyun. Luhan has always been a great friend and an enjoyable character.
It was your creative writing skills that kept me around for this long, you captured me right at the beginning when I first started reading it. In fact I think I've mention I finished all the chapters in one day to catch up to where you were. I really enjoy reading and ranking this story, it's the least I can do for a fantastic writer like you :)
Toria101 on says:
Lol the characters I hate...got the happy ending. SMH! lol
But thank you for writing this...you did so much from such a spontaneous challenge. I'm eagerly waiting for Forget, Don't Forget! HWAITING!!!
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