11 Yellow Dahlias Completed!

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mykismet  on says about chapter 31:
I have to fix my brain first before I start to write a very long comment for you, my dear friend. As expected, I read your fic in one go. I just can't stop. Your stories are like my drugs. Read one chapter only then bam!I'm already ADDICTED. XD. I really love you, what are you doing to my feels? My gosh. From chapter 1 up to the last one my head was aching from thinking too much. (I can actually relate to Sehun and Luhan T_T) In chapter 28 I was like "omg please don't kill Luhan AGAIN" and at the end of the chapter "GOSH PLEASE DONT KILL SEHUN" lol. I was literally going crazy and my heart was clenching and breaking and I can't even think straight. You are really amazing. It was scary reading about seth and the cult thing, It somehow reminded me about the movie, Sinister. T_T but I cant stop reading it even if its creeping the hell out of me and even if its 3 in the fawking morning and everyone is sleeping but me. You see what your fics do to me?! =)) I knew that I would love this fic just as much as I loved reading Shockwaves and I cant seriously wait to read Luhan's side of the story. Oh my gosh, this time Kai was the antagonist plus chen and xiumin. It was really amazing. You can seriously become a writer you know? First fantasy then mystery. I say you do romcom next! XD or maybe ANGST? >.< I know you'd be able to write them :) I wish I could write all my feels here but meh.. still mind _____ed. XD To sum it all up your fic was absolutely beautiful :) amazing, so freaking amazing.... I want mowrr!! :) I've been looking for you for so long and I'm really really glad I found you =) This had been one of the best fics I've read in aff so far and the Hunhan feels at the end.Gawwd, you are freaking killing me, I should hate you for that but I wouldn't (You're lucky I love you and you ff's) >.<
Lots of love~~ Hope you write more in the future :D

TheWindy  on says:
I know this fic is over, but simply the way you write and express everything, has caught my attention, so much so that I've read it in a row!
Definitely I have to thank you for writing this wonderful fic. Hunhan is my favorite ship and I love that there are different stories
I can't wait to read Luhan's part, I'm going to immediately subscribe to your other fic xD

MrWhipCreamBuddy  on says about chapter 31:
Uhhmm..... Could you at least tell me what happened after he saw the flowers. Sorry!! I'm really curious!! :// Please? :)

erstwhilefad  on says:
Gonna subscribe even though it's alr completed! I really like this story and how everything was so well thought-out! You should totally pursue writing as a career...I'll buy all your books, really! Anwwww, gosh everything from the title all the way to the last sentence of this fic is just screaming to be appreciated!! I'll read this over and over and over again until i don't know when, haha! Anw today i had a bio test and one question asked about dahlias and the genes that give them their colours! you have no idea how much I was smiling to myself then ;) heh, thanks for the hard work in creating this awesome story! ^^

yoongsoshi  on says about chapter 31:
finally i finished read the whole story...
well, i am not so into boy x boy pairing, but i am so attached with this fic...
the way you write i like it ><

Cloudsungie  on says about chapter 30:
I CAN'T. MY FEELS. THIS. STORY. OMG. LET'S START FROM THE BEGINNING.
Okay, first, this was so well-written and everything just fell into place. and I never knew Xiuchen was gonna be evil omg that just broke my hearttt ;AAA; And then when Kai said that line with people knowing that Sehun's favourite colour was yellow, I flipped all the tables. I was like OMG HE LIKES HIM but then Kai was part of the cult and I was like FMLLLLLLLLLLL ;AAAAAAAA;
asdlkajdhaklsjdhlaksjdhklajs I have to go read Red Roses now and omg this was just so perfect. ALL MY FEELS. and the dahlias at the end.
maybe it's just me but is Kai dead? Cause the chapter was called "a parting gift" and I don't know, I'm confused :$$ If you could help explain OTL unless it'll be explained in Red Roses then I'll just read that to figure out ^^ but this was just beautiful. <3

373k273c  on says:
This was so creepy, crazily amazing that it gave me chills. I was seriously on the edge of my seat the entire time, wondering what was going on and if LuHan would be saved.

On the note of LuHan, as much I a disapprove of him getting caught up in all of this...I LOVE NERDY LUHAN! GOSH. HE IS JUST SO ADORKABLE. XDD [faints] I can imagine him in suspenders, grandpa sweaters, and big glasses, and I just want to HUG HIM!!!

The entire time I was reading this, I kept finding all of those secret/not-so-secret hints you kept throwing out. Like how some of them were wearing the red bracelets or how Kai was like "They have to know your favourite colour is yellow.." and just. HOMG. I felt like jumping into the story and being all "Hold the damn phone. We're arresting Kai,the doctor, and anyone else with red stuff! And..and...yeah."

This was just...VERY unique and absolutely AMAZING. I loved this A LOT. And I'm looking forward to Red Roses! :DDD

l4lal4  on says about chapter 31:
FAVEEE!
something different i am happy with this
yes going to read red roses now

mijimena  on says:
Whoaaa this story looks so good. >.<
And your writing is nice too, very clear cut and crisp. (omg wait what?)
Hahahaha it really fits the whole mystery genre going on here.
*patters off to read moar*

optical_panda  on says:
That. was. the. best. story. EVER.


And generally I don't even read slash! It wasn't even really slash but still. O___o Wow. That was just good. Omg. I love your writing <3

I'm confused as to what happened to Kyungsoo though...Maybe you mentioned what happened but I might have missed it...

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