Not You!

Description

 

Title: Not You!
Sequel: He Loves Me
Author: babiettangkoma
Characters: Yesung, Kyuhyun, Siwon, Eunhyuk, Donghae, Leeteuk, Heechul.
Genre: Humor, Fluff
Rating: PG-15
Disclaimer: no mine.
Summary: They want to impress their beloved hyung. So, what will happen?

Foreword

Who will be the winner?

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Note I: Hello everyone! I feel really greatful for every comments that I've received. I know I wasn't reply any of it, but I did read it and appreciate it and I just feel the love from each of you in Asian Fan-Fics. Therefore, I want to terribly thanking all of you. Thank you for making so much effort to comment on my lame works. I will try to be a good writer in the future so I could make everyone happy. Please do comment if you pleased with my works or leave a critics which could make my works better, anything. I appreciate and treasure each of those. Thank you so much. 

Note II: This is practically my really old work. The English still as bad as usual, but I do hope you aren't confuse with the story line. Actually this story doesn't have any plot at all, I wrote this because I want to (at that time). I do hope you enjoy this story as much as I am. 

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farrelandmerry
354 streak #1
Chapter 1: LOL

WTF Kyu! When Hae, Hyuk and Siwon being so damn warm, you all of sudden, said something like that? XD

And 83 won just soooooo hilarious XDDD
Cloud_woon
#2
Chapter 1: I really thought that kyuhyun will say more un word,,but instead he said "I'm " daebak,,,hahhaha♡♡♡♡

Really nothing/no one beats 83line,,hahhahaha
fatimakys #3
Chapter 1: hahahahahahahahaha omg so crazy and so funny and the huge story change in the end deserve a reward hahahahahahaha. i see kyukyu had the shortest time with him that day hahaha and what kyukyu said hahahahahaha omg , author-nim this story is really funny
Cenya14 #4
Chapter 1: Lol cute story
kyusungnista #5
wa jajajajajajajajajaajaja so funny I LOVE STORY so cool haha yesunggii cute hha kyu mal
AngelicAngel
#6
Waaaaa! Jajajaja! I love this story! The one before this one was also great! Your english is understandable so don't worry bout it :) This story made me laugh I love to read things where they fight for someone it's sooo cooool! Thanks for writing and psting it! :D
yeyepapo
#7
bwuahahahaha
LOL realy funny, but i hope the 83 liner wont do 'something' to my beloved oppa^^
dar3d3v1lzgurlz
#8
nice story..
love your story soo much..