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(you) lied even while you held my hand Completed!
by nikatsu
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Shim Changmin & Im Yoona
Description
Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop.
Changmin (TVXQ) + Yoona (SNSD)
Romance, Angst. PG.
1,917 words.
Foreword
He loves everything about her.
“Changmin,” Yoona says his name softly. Grasping his hand in between hers, she says his name like a prayer – quietly, fervently.
He loves that the most.
Dedicated to Lynde (shinhyunae). ♥
Thanks for telling me to write, because I wouldn't have if you didn't.
Note: I got the inspiration to write this piece after listening to Stars' The Big Fight 18 times today. The lyrics didn't really stick for me until the very last word was written and so I'm unsure how this would actually fare for everyone. Initially I wanted to write another pairing for this plot but I realized that I couldn't write angst as well if I'm not in my element or if it isn't my OTP. The way this is written is a little different from how I usually write my oneshots. The voice overlap, from present to past to future. You'll understand once you read it. I hope you all enjoy this oneshot and let me know what you think! Check out my other stories and oneshots as well if you like and have time.
Recommendation: Into Your World by the wonderful, OnceUponATaem (feat. Taemin/Sulli and Krystal/Kai) | It is a gorgeous oneshot. You should take the time to read it too if you like!
Story and graphics by nikatsu/aoza 2011. All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of nikatsu/aoza. The following is a work of fiction. The events and characters are fictional and the celebrity names/images merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrity is in real life. No offence is intended towards them, their families or friends.
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Amoundies_tta on says about chapter 1:
i think your story has regarded with the 'When I Was Your Man by Bruno Mars' lyrics. (my favo song:) )
I did re-read again, and i am very sure that i have thought. :).
And this, successly broke my heart (again), like the latest time i read.
eyes2blues on says about chapter 1:
Oh gosh, my heart is aching... That was really sad. I know mutual feelings are good but being expressive means so much more sometimes. I love the transition between the past and the present. Nice play with words. Gosh, </3
The story was great but the best part was also having YunBoA moments here! ANd they got engaged!!!! asdfghhjkl! I'll be reading more of your work!
degreezious on says about chapter 1:
oh gosh! It's really sad ending. :(
Thanks to you nikka, you made me love this couple. And from now, I'll read all your story about changyoon couple.
I really really like it! :)
Va_asianloverz on says:
update soon please
foreverribbons on says:
this was so good yet heart-breaking. :'(
Kris-C25 on says:
OH MY T_T .. I felt my eyes became blurred only when I realized that I've cried when I read it :'( GAH! but still it's awesoMe :D
qrieya on says:
i hate this
can i become a selfish?
can i have the sequel?
but err...somehow...i like it..
why must everything end with the happy ending,right?
okay, dont make a sequel...
huhu
it is already beautiful...
AngelinaAnnNguyen on says:
>"< It's not a strange plot but it really made me feel quite .. uhm teary yeah... I wish he had told her... ChangYoon all the way <3. BTW you are a GREAT writer Nikka <3. You made me fall in love with ChangYoon, thanks for all the good stories and for this wonderful couple :x. Waiting for your next updates!!! ^^
sippirilli on says:
sad ending ;~;.. but it's not Yoona's fault..
Thanks for the story Nikka..
aiyumestranger on says:
I don't know how to explain it exactly but sometimes though people both know the feeling are mutual, words are still needed. It serves somewhat like a confirmation between them. It's written beautifully of course! Thanks for the good read^^
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