Stalker

by DarkFallenAngel
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Lee ~~~~~'s (The Original) POV

I was walking home alone, after a date with Luhan. It was dark. There was no one around, but I had a feeling that someone was following me. I walked faster and stupidly into an alley, where there were a bunch of drunks. Crap. There were three of them and only one of me.

I quickly walked past them, hoping they wouldn't notice me. But one grabbed me. "Hey pretty... where you going?" His words were slurred and his breath stank of alcohol.

"Let go of me." I struggled out of his grasp. Another guy came up from behind me and touched my hair.

"You've pretty hair." He chuckled.

I backed away from them. "Stay away... or else..."

"Or else what?" A third man asked, hiccuping.

"Or else I'll... call the police."

They laughed. One pushed me onto the ground.

I screamed. Another covered my mouth. "Shut up, bitch!" I struggled, kicking and punching. But what more could I do?

Out of the blue, a guy came out and smashed a glass bottle on one of the guy's head. He fainted instantly. The other two, drunkenly swore. He kicked one on the stomach and that guy flew into a pile of rubbish. He then punched the last guy who just dropped down onto the ground.

He reached out for me, but I scrambled away. "W-who are you?"

He smiled at me. He had a handsome face with perfectly carved features, but they were unrecognizable in the dark. Somehow... I felt safe with him. "I'm your stalker."

He carried me up, bridal style. Instead of struggling like any normal person would, I just let him carry me away. I felt safe. I felt warm. I smiled. "My stalker..."

*****

When I woke up, I was in my own bed in my own room, at home. I sat up, all my memories of what happened rushing back to me. Where was he? My stalker. I looked at the opened window; wind whistled in gently. On my bedside table, I spotted a note.

Sorry for scaring you earlier, but always know, you'll be safe with me. I'll always be watching you, making sure you're ok.

-Your Stalker

I hugged the note to my heart, a smile spreading on my face. "Thank you, my stalker." I said, aloud, somehow knowing he could hear me.

Lee ~~~~~'s (The Original) POV End

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kyungseu  on says about chapter 35:
I WANT TO CRY BUT NO I KENOT BECAUSE MY DAD IS NEXT TO ME ;A;
your story is different from the others. I like it :3

AloOoOolE  on says about chapter 35:
A really different fic, in a good way ofc. I live ur imagination about things ^__^
Even I thought the end 'll be something else, but I still like it ♡ ~~
Thanx ~ I'll look forward ur other fic ~

infinite7myungsooL  on says about chapter 35:
Beautiful story :') it's so sad but i love it :')

aigooooo  on says about chapter 35:
it would've been cute if Kai actually knew that she was the clone and loved her too ^^ good story though

kpop_fan_1998  on says about chapter 35:
Omg. That was propobly one of the best sad fics I've ever read on AFF.
But I feel sad for the Clone. Just imagine your lover thinks you"re someone else. The fact that your lover 'loves' you back becomes insignificant if he thinks youre someone else...

rlab4ever  on says about chapter 35:
You made me cry!!! But then my annoying and cheerful brother came in which ruined my mood again!!! And I have the same question as KimShinYeong94, did he actually think that the girl was the original or clone?

KimShinYeong94  on says about chapter 35:
Can u please tell me who he actually think that girl is ? Did he actually thought that the girl was the clone or the real one ? Please answer me :( you left it hanging there <///3.

NonfatMilk  on says about chapter 35:
WOW. i never expected to cry at the 35th chapter,just..WOW.
it was truly amazing.just WOW. i can't say anything right but WOW and "THEY DIED TOGETHER!!*INSERT LOUD SOBS HERE* "

All i'm saying is that....your story is .WOW. lol
it was rockin' :)

Cheonsa  on says about chapter 35:
.....

What is my life about?

LiarLiarYoureOnFire  on says about chapter 35:
I'm so sad it's over. I have so many doubts and thoughts on Kai's condition. I can't believe Luhan and Lee died... ;—;

I'm all depressed now. I wanna cry but I can't. ;A;

I wanna leave a longer comment but I can't. ;A;

I'm sad since this is over. I really loved reading this, I always waited for your updates. ;—;

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