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This is the song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NwNFT8Ye120

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Yunho cried hard. Today was Jaejoong's funeral. And he had been staring at his picture ever since they took him away.

But fate is always kind to him. And so the gears of time turned back. Until it was the day before they met.

Yunho ran out of the church, only to bump into someone.

"I'm really sorry." he said and bowed to the man he bumped into. He looked up and saw Jaejoong. Yunho's eyes widened. He hugged Jaejoong tightly.

But Jaejoong pushed him away. He fell to the ground. But his eyes never left Jaejoong.

 

Once he got home, Yunho looked at the calendar. He became happy. He's been given a chance to stop the accident from happening.

 

 

Yunho looked from outside the glass window. Jaejoong was dancing, and it was beautiful and graceful. He observed every step.

Then he looked behind him. And there was a newspaper stand. One article caught his eye. It was of the accident.

 

 

Jaejoong had just finished practicing for his performance onstage. And he was just about to cross the road while the stoplight was blinking. Luckily, Yunho was following him to make sure that he's safe and pulled him in a hug and away from the road before the car hit him.

Again, Jaejoong pulled away. But this time he understood why he was hugged.

"Are you okay?" Yunho asked.

"Yeah."

 

Yunho was walking Jaejoong home. He was glad he came on time.

"Hey, I've got to go now. But I hope I'll see you again soon." Jaejoong said.

"Alright. Be careful. How about tomorrow, we meet up in your house."

"Okay. Bye!"

 

 

Yunho looked around. There were lots of posters of the performance that Jaejoong's going to be in.

After Jaejoong had finished pouring the coffee, Yunho remembered to put a sugar cube on his cup.  Jaejoong stared at him.

Yunho felt that this was an awkward moment and laughed nervously. Then, he grabbed his mug, drinking it to distract himself from looking into Jaejoong's eyes. But he forgot the fact that the coffee was hot. Jaejoong chuckled.

"How did you know? About the sugar......" he asked.

Yunho just smiled and blew to his mug of coffee, before drinking it again.

 

 

They went outside for a little walk. But Jaejoong noticed something in Yunho's hands. He looked up into the sky.

"It dosen't look like it's going to rain. Why are you carrying an umbrella?"

Yunho looked at his watch. "Wait for it." He opened the umbrella and put it over their heads when the rain suddenly came.

"Shall we go now?" Yunho asked.

"Sure." Jaejoong replied.

 

 

Jaejoong asked Yunho to go shopping with him. And he agreed. Right now, they're shopping at a clothing store. Then, something caught Yunho's eye. An ancient-looking pocket watch. But he noticed Jaejoong looking at him so he put it back.

Jaejoong looked back and glanced at the pocketwatch. He decided that he will buy it for Yunho.

 

 

 

The next day, it was Jaejoong's last practice. And he allowed Yunho to watch him.

But what he didn't know was that today was the day of the accident.

Yunho remembers the funeral, and how he cried so hard about Jaejoong's death. But time had been reversed, and he has a chance to save Jaejoong. He will try to convince him to not go to the performance despite the older man's hard work. But if that dosen't work, then he has another plan. He will stop Jaejoong's death, even if he has to die for it.

But he went to the toilet first to prevent Jaejoong from seeing his tears.

 

Jaejoong used that oppurtunity to place the pocket watch that he bought for Yunho in his jacket pocket. But unfortunately, the article of the accident was in that same pocket.

Jaejoong pulled it out and read it. But he misread it. Then he looked at the picture, it was of the place where he was going to perform.

Yunho chose that time to come back.

 

"What's this? Are you a stalker?" Jaejoong asked, a little angry.

"At that church......It had just been your funeral." Yunho replied nervously.

"My funeral?"

"Can you not go to your performance?" Yunho pleaded.

Jaejoong grabbed Yunho's jacket. "Please get out."

"You will die if you go!"

"I told you to get out."

Looks like he's going to use his plan B. Death.

 

Jaejoong remembered what Yunho said earlier.

"You will die if you go!"

But he shook it off and put his earphones on. And he went outside.

 

A drunk man got inside the car. Even if his state is like that, he will go home to his wife.

 

 

Yunho ran to the stoplight where the accident happened. He then spotted Jaejoong walking to it. But there was another thing he spotted-he was wearing earphones. He ran faster.

 

The drunk driver was almost to the spotlight. But it was so blurry he can't even concentrate on the road.

 

 

"Jaejoong-ah!" But he didn't hear Yunho. The car was dangerously close to them now.

Yunho stood in front of Jaejoong.

CRASH!

That sound was so loud that even Jaejoong heard it. He stopped in his tracks and looked back.

Yunho was on the ground, eyes closed, and with blood coming out from his head.

And the pocket watch that he was holding at that time dropped, and it broke.

 

Jaejoong's eyes widened. He went to Yunho's side.

"Wake up! Please wake up!"

Tears were already froming in his eyes. He saw the pocket watch and picked it up.

"Don't leave me, Yunho! Don't!"

 

 

 

I'm sorry Yunho, for not listening to you. If I had, we both would still be here, happy.

You remained deeper than a scar in my heart so I can't erase you. But I guess I loved you too severely.

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Well that was harder to write. But the song was similar to 'In Heaven' that I got many ideas to write.

Sorry if that was a little lame. But I'm having a hard day. I just learned that I became from top 3 to top 4.

 And I even got scolded by my parents just because I won't answer the phone!!!

 

But cause of your comments and subscriptions, I go through all of those stuff and still be happy later.........

 

Kamsamnida!!!!!

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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nielKim  on says:
Looks like he's going to use his plan B. Death.

this very sentence, it really caught me.

marshmallowangel  on says:
aigoo!!!! srangahe!! i looooooooooooooooooooooveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yunjae fanfics wahhhh !! kamasamnida

FixxIdea  on says:
I love it :) You described so well the process ^^

FEPRIme  on says:
As a primadonna, I love the way you describe the process ^^

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