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Note Completed!
by atkluna
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jinki kibum taemin
Description
Jinki still can't understand why someone as outgoing, confident and all around perfect as Kibum fell for someone like him; shy, awkward, and a low self-esteem.
It's been six months since they begun their relationship, but being the private person he is, Jinki wants to keep it secret and his loving boyfriend, of course, respects this desicion. But when Kibum gets busy with drama club, design club, and all his other friends, the other is stuck home alone with his books and his journal as his only comfort (There's also the rare ocassion when he's deperate to vent and asks Taemin to come over - the boy lived just downstairs from the apartment building.).
Jinki feels as though he isn't as important anymore and questions whether the other loves him as much as he claims.
It takes a simple note from his lover to realize something amazing.
Foreword
So this is an onkey oneshot ! <3
It's based off a short story I wrote when I was 15. This story is exactly how I felt with my special someone at the time. So basically, the Jinki in this story is me, and Key represents my former.
I hold this story close to my heart so I hope you can enjoy ^^
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mzjonghyun on says about chapter 1:
So beautiful
jinkionki93 on says about chapter 1:
this is so beautiful ><
i can relate to onew's character so much cause im kinda like that...
a lil reserved...
i love how you wrote their insecurities and the resolvement in the end.. so sweet...
thankyou for sharing ^^
xoxogossipgoat on says about chapter 1:
woah dude this was just sooooooooooooooooo amazing and dfalk;jdjkha;ldf and EFJWAKLS:DFJA:F like how do fluff? lol
vienasoma on says:
wow...
rite.. that so cheesy... but i kinda like it... XD
amazmi on says:
omg, that is the sweetest thing ever kibummie !! yes, i'll marry you !lol XD
epilogue pleaseeeeeeeeeee :D
HikariLee on says:
this is so lovely and cute, onkey is the best x33 I need an epilogue of course ♥♥♥ Taemin's role here was so amazing, I want a friend like him xD
hope you can write more onkey *.*
noriko24 on says:
Aaaaaa, do the epilogue!!! I need them!
Oh God, this fic just so... >_< I don't know how to explain this feeling, it's cheesy but I still like it <3
naadianadeen on says:
Of course we need an epilogue for this!
bbonkey on says:
uh, epilog please. . .
love this one! ><
Skittles4220 on says:
Ahhh so cute! >.< <3 i love onkey and this was just toooo cute and sweet. great job!!!!
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