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Color the Lights Completed!
by pandoraSV13
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henhae
henry
henrylau
kibum
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Henry, Donghae, Siwon, Kibum, Kyuhyun, Ryeowook, Eunhyuk
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He wished he could say it had never been his intention to hurt the boy, but that was a lie. Back then, all he wanted to do was hurt him. The mere thrill of pushing someone else down was what drove him to keep moving, laughing, and living the way he was meant to live.
Everyone told him this was what he was meant to be. He had never argued because yes, it was surely the way to live.
To obey, to pillage, to be greater and to believe he was greater – all of that amounted to a future worth living.
That’s what was drilled into Donghae’s mind. He knew it was true. He knew with such unshakeable truth that that was the honest to fucking goodness truth.
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Warnings: Swearing, Sexual Situations
Disclaimer: I own only the plot.
(NOTE: This is also posted on LiveJournal)
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pandoraSV13 [A] on says:
This is comment 50 because I can't stand that it's at 49. What a ridiculous number >.>
hermion8 on says about chapter 24:
♥ the ending! Hihi... Sequel? :D
willowtree on says:
I was pretty content reading those extra scenes, it was interesting to see what could have been and get a little extra insight in to Hae's relationships with Siwon and Henry. But then this happened:
Mine’s better,” Kyuhyun scoffed. He flashed a wicked grin, “I am talking about Ryeowook, by the way.”
And the Kyuwook shipper in me EXPLODED. You killed me, laughing, in two lines. I really need to get out more XD
allison9087 on says:
The endings to your stories are always amazing going to miss this story.
NatalieMarie on says:
IT WAS ALL A DREAM?! good idea. -_^
charietigre on says:
Love this! The ending was amazing :) love the twist :D sooo happy I stumbled across this fic :)
DredhezRei on says:
whoa.. that was a new kind of ending.. but it's good nonetheless.. I could only make my own assumptions what happened to their 'other' life ends.
it's good!
thank you for making this~ Good job!! :D
lahdeedah000 on says:
First, when I saw this was marked as "complete", I was like....O_o?? But, after reading it, I had a smile on my face. I guess I wish you kept the "dream" going longer, but I'm still satisfied at how things turned out. ^^
KimSuYe on says:
The end was so unexpected. But it doesn't mean that I didn't like it, since it was really great. Donghae doesn't sound like an _____ anymore XD
willowtree on says:
Oh this one is over as well? :( I was a little disappointed at first because the idea of everything that had happened was only a dream seemed like a waste. But I think I do like your ending, you have a way of writing things with grandeur, like you give this feeling of everything being so much more than it is.
Well anyways hope to see something of yours around here soon :]
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