Revenge is just started!

Revenge (Under editing)

 

 Ren pov

 

When I arrived school, I step off the limo and walk into school, I hurry up walk in class, I don’t know why but I want to meet him, yes, Minhyun. while I was walking to class, I heard girls laugh and his.. voice?? I glare to where that sound come from...

I saw him and other boy, I don’t know him, also bunch of girl surround him. He smiles to all those girl, I feel anger in my mind, I don’t know why but I feel like that. I run fast to the class, why did I feel angry with that? he is just my ‘friend’ not my special or something. aish!! Hwang Minhyun what did you do to me??? I mess my hair then I feel someone touch it, I look up and saw minhyun smiling and tidy my hair

“you don’t look cute with that messy hair” he said

I feel my face hot with that, what is this feeling?

“hey, why your face look so red? are you sick?” he ask me, look really worry

Is he really worries about me?

“no....ju...st.....I’m.. the weather ....is...too... hot” I said really nervous...

“but the weather is cold today, are you okay?” he ask again and touch my face

“yes, I’m okay... I need to go for the restroom now” I said and run out from the class to the restroom

I look at myself in the mirror, my face look so red. what is wrong with me?? I touch my chest and my heart is beating like crazy. I waste my face and went back to class.

the teacher is not coming yet?? there no one in the class except him..

I walk in awkwardly and ask him

“Where is everyone?”

“the first period is canceled so everyone is go out”

“oh.... and what about you?” I ask with my curious face then he pinch my cheek

I was really stunned by his action and I feel the same, hot and my heart beating so fast

“you’re cute~ I’m waiting for you” he wait for me??? what for???

“hmmm.... what for?” I ask

“you’re feeling okay?? you’re red again..” he said and touch my face

I feel like I like his touch..

“no...no... I’m okay”

“Then you want to play outside?”

“huh??”

“Come on! let’s get out of here” he said and drag me with him

“where are we going?” I ask him

“somewhere fun” he answer

“but but we have class to attend” I said but well.. I really want to go with him

“don’t care about that” he said and smiling

we sneak out of school and he still hold my hand, I don’t protest cause I feel like I like his touch, I look at our hand while running

“Here we are!!!!!” He shouts and I look up

“Amusement Park??” I said

“yes!!! let’s go in!! shall we?” he ask me with excited sound

“hm, okay” I said, I used to been here with my cousin once but there no fun cause he doesn’t do anything but flirt with me.

Minhyun drag me and got the ticket for us and we got to ride alot of things there ect.

 

I never been happy like this before, I laugh alot today and I never feel like this before.

but too bad evening coming and it mean it’s time to go home.

“Ren, it’s evening let’s go home” he said

“hmm... can we stay abit more?” I said while pout

he smile and mess my hair

“I know you want to stay but your parent will be worry about you now”

“they doesn’t home today, please okay?” I said with my plead voice

“aigoo... you’re cute~~ okay!!” he said and pinch my cheek

“thank” I smile to him and he smile back but suddenly my stomach make sound and he laugh at it and said

“Ren, are you hungry?”

I just nod cause can’t deny the fact

“then want to eat something instead of staying here?” he ask

“hmm, good idea” I said

“my treat, let’s go” He said and pull my hand, he hold my hand again, I can’t help but smile to the fact

after done with the food, he suggest to walk me home and I agree, well... I want to stay with him more... why? I can’t find the answer too.

“we’re here” I said and look at him

“oh, this is your house?” He said without stop eyeing my house

“yeah...” I answer and look at him curious

“It’s huge!! you’re rich!!” he said

“but I don’t really enjoy it” I said and look down, cause I can’t be myself

“Why?” he ask raising his eyebrow

“nothing... by the way I have so much fun today!!! Thank you so much” I said and smile

“o..h It’s okay, It’s my pleasure” he smile, he always smile and I like it

“I got to go now, thank you again” I said and wave goodbye to him

he still smile and wave back at me. I walk in my house while looking back at him.

 

Minhyun Pov

I wave at ren when ‘she’ goes back to her house, until she gone I continue walk to my house

‘she is not that bad, she’s nice and kind of cute too, why is this girl can do something harsh like this to nice guy like baekho.. I don’t understand.... but after all Baekho is hurt, I already promise that make her pay, and she will pay.... Ren, Revenge is just started!!!

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Thank for reading and comment!!! hope you enjoy the update and btw some of you can guess it right hehehehe

 

 

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luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#1
Chapter 2: This is a nice story authornim!! Minren <3
Yara-chan #2
Chapter 20: Loved this~<3
stanwendy
#3
Chapter 8: Hah. Serves you right, Minhyun XP
stanwendy
#4
Chapter 7: OMG.. I pity Ren... X3
nightStar
#5
congrats :)
MikeeMouse #6
Congratulations
BabyYixing
#7
Congrats!!
BarbieTiffany
#8
Despite the grammar issues, don't ever give up writing okay? You have potential, to be honest. You can read English books to help your English and widen your vocabulary. ^^ Anyway, congrats on the random feature!
kkai_otic
#9
Chapter 2: This story is great I tell you, and congratulation for the feature!! I hope this get edited soon or beta-ed, im sorry but I just cant continue reading it some are hard to understand but im gonna subscribe and anticipate for the edited version, GOODLUCK~^^
lovelyme23 #10
Congratulations!