Ask for Second Chance

Revenge (Under editing)

Minhyun pov

“Stop being stubborn already, Ren” I said

he turn to me shock and I just smile to him

I walk to him and said

“so you really are ren”

“Wh-a—t ar-e y-ou saying? I’m not Ren” he said stuttering

“Stop pretending” I said and pull him into a hug, I really miss her.. oh, I mean him

“what are you saying?” he said and struggle from my hug but I don’t let him go, how can I..

“it’s really you Ren” I said ignore his question

“YAH!!” he shout, I release the hug but still put my hand on his shoulder

“I’m sorry for what I have done, and now I know how much I love and I really can’t lost you, Forgive me please Ren.. I mean Minki” I said and smile to him when I change to call him Minki

I can see that he slightly blush but then he sigh

“A word Sorry can’t fix anything minhyun, and I have nothing to forgive you too because I’m not ren” he said and look down

“Stop denying it, I know that you’re Ren” I said and try to look at him

“I’m sorry, I’m really sorry, give me a second chance please” I pled him and try to look at his eyes, he look up at me and I notice the tear in his eyes

“No, Minhyun, We can’t start again, It’s enough for me” he said and before I grab his wrist he already run off, I follow him

“Ren, please wait”

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I follow him until we reach his house and his quickly run inside and close the door.

I knock the door

“Ren, please.. talk with me first.. I’m really sorry I will do anything to fix my mistake just please give me a second chance” I said while knocking on his door

but there is no respond, maybe I rush thing so fast, he may need times.

“I’m sorry if I rush thing up so fast, you may need time but please consider about it, I really sorry and I won’t make you cry again. I will wait for your decision no matter how long” I said and walk off to my house with one last glare before I leave.

Please, Minki all I need is second chance.

 

Minki Pov

I listen to all his words behind my door while cry

listening to his words I feel sincerely and I really want to give him a second chance but It can’t be

I’m not girl anymore, our love will be forbidden and we will face a lot of problems, I don’t want that to happen.

“Oh, young master, what’s happen?” Mrs.Kim exclaimed and come to kneel in front of me

I hug her

“Mrs.Kim”

“What’s wrong? why are you crying?” she said while pat my back

“It’s him” I said while sobbing

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I change to pajamas after wash myself and crying.

my phone ring and I look at it

1 new message from Minhyun

I grab it and open the message

Good Night~~ Sweet Dream~~ I love you~~

I sigh and put my phone back down and get on bed to sleep

Just forget me Minhyun we can’t be together again.

I feel tear run down from my eyes I wipe it and close my eyes to sleep.

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Late update and short?? sorry I busy with my works....

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luludeer7_abcdEXO88m
#1
Chapter 2: This is a nice story authornim!! Minren <3
Yara-chan #2
Chapter 20: Loved this~<3
stanwendy
#3
Chapter 8: Hah. Serves you right, Minhyun XP
stanwendy
#4
Chapter 7: OMG.. I pity Ren... X3
nightStar
#5
congrats :)
MikeeMouse #6
Congratulations
BabyYixing
#7
Congrats!!
BarbieTiffany
#8
Despite the grammar issues, don't ever give up writing okay? You have potential, to be honest. You can read English books to help your English and widen your vocabulary. ^^ Anyway, congrats on the random feature!
kkai_otic
#9
Chapter 2: This story is great I tell you, and congratulation for the feature!! I hope this get edited soon or beta-ed, im sorry but I just cant continue reading it some are hard to understand but im gonna subscribe and anticipate for the edited version, GOODLUCK~^^
lovelyme23 #10
Congratulations!