Back in the school

Zelo : Girl You're Mine ♥

Stayed two weeks to start school , you was preparing your things before school begin

Umma~~ i'm going to the mall i want a lot things . you said

Umma : Ok but be careful

okay~~ .  you said out loud

You went to the mall with you'er best friends Jiyeon and Yoomi

look at that shoes it's so beautiful " you said

woow it's really beautiful " yoo mi said

i want it ..it's mine , you said

ookay let's go and buy it . " jiyeon said

  .Yess." You all with one voice

 then you enter the footwear market , and buy it you was so happy

.Then you went to your home and with you a lot of sacks

 Your parents get a shock and O face . what is this !! You parents said out loud . haha nothing " you said 

It is time to return to school . You slept early

 

In the morning

 

Come on ______~ ah it's time to wake up " your mum said

okay mum " you said

 you go to the bath and get shower, you eat you breackfest and want to the school

you was so pretty today , you went to the school but it was empty

you get weird of this .. " where all the students go ? " you said weirdly

but you keep walking until you meet with all students in a single class

OMG " you said this with O face"

 ...________and the reason was

     

 

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How was it ?! . I hope you like it

it's my firs fanfic i hope you enjoyed

 and I'm sorry for spelling errors & grammars cuz the English language isn't my first language

  plaese keep cheering me ^.^ and thinks

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Zahjen #1
Love your story pleasee update~
kpopmaniic #2
Love your story!
kookie_zelo123 #3
Chapter 7: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! T^TT I LOVE IT~ ♥
jjbapkpop #4
Chapter 7: hard to understand but overall it's pretty good for someone who is still learning the language. Keep on fighting. I can tell you this, English is one of the easiest language so hope you improve and best wishes.
heyyitscher
#5
Chapter 7: I LOVE IT!! PLS UPDATEEE!! :)
Unknownguy #6
i love its good update soon plz :D
xxamytjeexx #7
Chapter 7: I love it :D
imgonnamarryjunhong
#8
Chapter 7: i love it! please ipdate! : D
EdPotter
#9
Chapter 7: i'm not the type who'll leave comments negatively, but i really need to say this..
this story is interesting, but you need to improve your language skill. i won't mind having a bit grammar mistake but if the most of it are wrong, it will disturb the original story plot or twist the real meanings.
and add something like "_____" to show that someone is talking. if you write it continuously, the readers will have a hard time of reading. besides that, the story is fine :)
babysoneforever
#10
Chapter 6: Update please! :)) It's interesting. ;)