Pied Piper of Hamelin

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A/n: First part of today's 2-chapters update.

 

Chapter 44

[Pied Piper of Hamelin]

 

 

 

“If we run now, we can get help from the nearest town,” suggested Sooyoung.

 

Heechul shook his head –tired and frustrated altogether. “We don’t have a lot of time. You know that, Sooyoung,” Heechul began as he opened the cupboards –trying to find weapons. “It would take us nearly an hour to reach the entrance to the forest gate. Another two hours ride to the nearest town. We cannot expect the villagers to risk their lives for ours. And even if we call the official force from the army or the police, it may take up to another hour before help finally comes,” he mumbled to himself as he strolled from one cabinet to another.

 

He opened the fourth cabinet and finally found the weapons he was looking for. There were some revolvers and knives, and he greedily took them all out of the cabinet.

 

Heechul’s viewpoint still sounded reckless to Sooyoung.

 

“Yes, but what can we do?” Sooyoung asked; her hands were clenched together in agitation. “What we’re facing is a serial killer. And if my cousin is involved, the Choi bodyguards will –“

 

“At least the Choi won’t harm you,” Heechul remarked in a bitter chuckle. “I’ve never been this envious of the Choi until now.”

 

Sooyoung did not need Heechul’s sarcasm. No one wanted to hear such discouraging words in such a seemingly-hopeless situation. “Come on, Oppa, you’re not planning to ambush them yourself, are you?”

 

Heechul glared at her. “Well, duh, no. You’re coming with me. You’re the only one who knows the way to the Choi villa right?”

 

Sooyoung widened her eyes. Baffled, she replied, “T-true, but this is not a mere courage test. This will be a reckless suicide. We –“

 

“Fine,” Heechul interrupted her there –not really in a mood for a debate. He murmured something under his breath that sounded like ‘girls’ and ‘troublesome’. Heechul did not even look at Sooyoung anymore when he continued his words, “If you’re afraid, then just do whatever you want. You and Jessica can climb down the hill, call for help if you’re still willing, and just pray the help comes before that Tiffany and your cousin kill me.”

 

The Choi lady massaged her temple in exasperation. She mildly remembered how Ryeowook said debating with Heechul would always be a useless kind of battle. Sooyoung cleared , glanced momentarily at Jessica, before she came up with another point, “Not that I doubt Jessica-sshi’s testimony here, but there’re chances they would not kill them yet.”

 

“Right,” Heechul agreed. “Chances. Unfortunately, I’m not taking that risk.”

 

“This is suicide, Kim Heechul,” Sooyoung warned again.

 

That, he knew and perfectly understood. He didn’t even know what kind of determination that had possessed his body. True, Heechul grew up being a curious kid who longed for an adventure. But he knew that this was no longer a childish adventure – or an adventure at all. The risk was not being scolded by his parents, the risk would be his life. He was always the big-mouthed coward who claimed to be a daredevil, but he knew that he was really not that courageous, or heroic, or anything.

 

He was only Kim Heechul. He was human; he feared death. If it weren’t for the presences of the two girls and the existence of his own ego, maybe he would have wailed the whimpers of fear. But he shook it off. Because if he was not a brave man, he just needed to act like one. “I only need to climb up that way, right?” he asked for Sooyoung’s confirmation as he pointed out at a direction from the hut’s window.

 

“Come on, Heechul Oppa,” Sooyoung still tried to persuade him to cancel his idea. “There’s nothing you can do. Why do you have to do this?”

 

The reply did not come from Heechul’s mouth, but rather from Jessica’s.

 

“Yoona, correct?” she said.

 

Heechul did not affirm nor deny it, but Jessica’s response was indeed the answer. He had prepared his supplies. Knife and gun in each of his pockets; determination in his heart. Standing up, he then walked towards the door. “Just go down the hill, call for help. Leave Donghae here, but make sure someone picks him up later. I’ll just… try my luck and see what I can do.”

 

Sooyoung stood still.

 

Jessica stood up –her legs were wobbling in the process. Without saying a word, Jessica walked to one of the cabinets and took another gun from it. Both Heechul and Sooyoung glanced at her questioningly. To their inquiring gazes, Jessica only sighed. ”Boys are not the only ones who know how to defend themselves,” she said as she walked to Heechul’s direction.

 

Heechul did not tear his eyes from her, and despite anything, he gave a quick glance from her head to her toes –as if scrutinizing whether she fitted the battle or not. Jessica could not help but to think how nostalgic it suddenly was. When she first met Heechul, he also had this doubtful look on her.

 

But I prove you wrong a lot of times, don’t I? Just as you prove me wrong equally as much.

 

“I owe you my life. And this would invalidate your theory on girl power,” Jessica sated firmly.

 

The skeptical stare slowly softened and Heechul eventually responded, “You know what? I wish I could be that gentleman and tell girls to stay out of this kind of business, but,” Heechul chuckled, and for the first time since he last remembered, he allowed himself to show Jessica a small, sincere smile. “But I’m glad I’m not that gentleman.”

 

Jessica also mildly chuckled. “I always know you are the coward sissy boy.”

 

“I’ll second you for that this time only,” he replied with a little laugh. “But seriously, thank you… Jessica.”

 

Jessica nodded briefly as she put on the smallest boots available in the hut that Sooyoung had prepared earlier.  “Come on. We’re running out of time.”

 

Heechul nodded back and the two of them walked out of the hut, leaving Choi Sooyoung standing still on her spot.

 

 

 

 

 

Sooyoung walked hazily down the hill.

 

I’m doing the right thing, she told herself.

 

She was the only rational one out of them. Probably not the bravest, but still, she was the one with the common sense. Perhaps the guilt would linger for a while, but she tried to brush the negative thought away. She repeated to herself that she was doing the wisest choice; that someone needed to get help from the local people; that her being in the crazy partnership of Heechul and Jessica would not bring much contribution; that she would only die silly if she decided to follow them.

 

She continued her march down the hill –to the opposite direction of the Choi’s villa. She continued her journey down to safety.

 

Sooyoung ignored the fact that Heechul tried to fight his own fear to settle things right; she tried to forget that even the barely-alright Jessica still decided to help Heechul; she tried to numb her senses, telling her mind that this was the right thing to do.

 

This was her sense of justice.

 

The snow layer was deep. That, or she had been out of focus that she tripped on her steps. Letting out a mild gasp, she fell down to the ground, her face was slammed to the thick snow.

 

She stayed there.

 

Her fists tightened.

 

Get up, Choi Sooyoung. There’s nothing you can do if you follow them. Go down quickly and call for help. That’s the only thing you can do.

 

“Damn it,” she groaned as she punched the snow.

 

She was still a righteous person and she had been living her life as one. One instance of rational thought to call for help would not wipe off that fact.

 

            “Sooyoung Unnie, thank you for always taking care of me. Thank you for still befriending me.”

 

Seohyun’s voice resonated in her mind.

 

            “Sometimes I’m embarrassed with myself. I’m the guy, you’re the girl. Yet you’re way braver than I am.”

 

Ryeowook’s words mocked her senses.

 

            “My daughter, you may not inherit the Choi throne. But I could never ask for more. Having you as a daughter is already a pride for me.”

 

Her father’s hope that now sounded cynical to her ears.

 

“Damn it, damn it…” she chanted more, she punched the snow more.

 

Why did you come here in the first place, Sooyoung? You want to stop your cousin, right? You want to set things right, don’t you?

 

Tears stung her eyes.

 

She was doing the right thing. For goodness’ sake, she had always been doing the right thing. She was the righteous, justice protector Choi Sooyoung. She had protected the weak from bullies; she had fought for against the unfairness in social structure; she had done what she could have done. Surely no one expected her to do more than what she could have done, right? Saving peoples’ lives? Had she not done enough?

 

Kim Heechul’s voice resonated in her mind.

 

            “Where is the justice, Choi Sooyoung?”

 

Sooyoung let out an irritated shout to the silent hill, to the oblivious snow, before she pushed herself up and ran back upwards towards the hill.

 

 

 

 

 

Both Jessica and Heechul widened their eyes when they realized there was someone running behind them, who finally stopped her steps and caught her breath.

 

“Why –”

 

“I don’t even know,” Sooyoung muttered, still trying to breathe normally. “Don’t ask.”

 

“But what about the help?” Jessica asked instead.

 

Sooyoung shrugged. Oh, see? She was doing the irrational thing, and now none of them had back-up. She knew she should have ignored that irritating sense of crazy justice and went to the nearest town instead.

 

But instead of going downhill again, Sooyoung just stood straight. “I’ll figure out a way. If we can get near the villa, there must have been some signal reception. We can try calling for help there,” she stated, feeling a bit foolish for not thinking about it sooner. “Now, we’d better hurry up,” she exclaimed as she made more advance steps towards the direction of the Choi’s resort.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sooyoung directed them through a pathway that led them to the back passage of the Choi resort. The villa stood tall and beautiful in the dark night of December, but the three of them knew that the grand villa might be a bloody slaughterhouse by the end of the night.

 

“What time is it?”

 

Sooyoung checked her wristwatch. “Half past ten. Less than two hours before midnight.”

 

“So how do we get inside the villa, again?” asked Heechul, looking up at the tall metal bars that worked as the back gates. “Climbing up again?”

 

Sooyoung dug her pocket and revealed a chain of metal key. She had predicted earlier that morning that they would be going to the Choi villa, so she had stolen the keys from her housekeeper back there in Seoul. “Come. We’ll get inside through the garden,” she told her accomplices as she walked to the direction to her right.

 

The three of them walked, leaving their footprints on the thick snow. Heechul glanced pass his shoulders to the obvious trail they were making and gave the comment, “Hope your Choi guards are not that diligent enough to patrol around at night,” Heechul commented.

 

“Hopefully not,” agreed Sooyoung. “There might still be guards inside though. Worst comes to worst, I expect you to knock them unconscious, Oppa.”

 

Heechul grunted. “This is why I don’t like teaming up with girls.”

 

Both girls ignored his usual ist comment and continued their walks instead.

 

Soon, they were greeted with the sight of metal gates surrounded by plant walls. Sooyoung sighed and began to sort the correct key to open the gates. It took her nearly five minutes of trials and errors, before she could finally find the key that matched the lock. The sound of matched lock was dull, but the sound that came when Sooyoung pushed open the gate was not.

 

The three of them stood rooted in alarm –the creaking sound of the gate was almost painful to hear. Jessica nearly imagined that panicked footsteps would come to their spot upon hearing that creaking sound, but to their fortune, everything around was still.

 

“Come on,” Sooyoung commnded, that time in a whisper.

 

The Choi’s garden was truly beautiful, even in winter –where snowdrops were the only flowers apparent in their views. The pile of snow covered the dark soil and decayed plants like a soft blanket. Porcelain sculptures portraying Greek Gods and Goddesses were placed in the suitable corners. There was something rather whimsical about the garden. The garden itself was designed as a miniature of a maze and Jessica could only wish Sooyoung would still remember the way out of the puzzling garden –or else they would be wasting their time circling around it.

 

From how determined Sooyoung seemed, Jessica felt assured that the girl had a better knowledge on what to do. At the back of her mind, there had been a lingering suspicion towards Sooyoung, but Jessica knew how the girl had saved her life. Even if Sooyoung turned out to lead them into a trap, Jessica would just consider it as her own risk.

 

Sooyoung finally stopped in front of a door –a wooden one that was designed to imitate those wooden doors in the medieval centuries. From Sooyoung’s expression, Jessica could tell that this was the door that would drag them closer to the main building of the Choi’s villa.

 

“The villa is some feet away behind this door,” informed Sooyoung. “The thing is, I’m not sure whether there would be guards positioned between this garden and the main building.”

 

“Assuming that there are no guards, do you already have the key to the inside the building?” inquired Heechul.

 

Sooyoung nodded. She sorted the keys again for precautions, and her trembling finger finally stopped at a silver one, quite distinguishable from the rest of gold-polished keys. She looked up to Heechul. “This is the key that would lead us to the servants’ back door. But…”

 

Heechul sighed impatiently. “Then just open this door. We cannot waste time here anyway. If there are guards, we’ll think of it later.”

 

“So much of a plan,” commented Jessica.

 

“Do you have a better idea?” rhetorically snapped Heechul. To this, Jessica remained silent.

 

“Alright,” exclaimed Sooyoung as she inserted the key to the entrance door of the garden. “Here goes nothing,” she said as she turned the key.

 

Anxiety crept inside Jessica again as Sooyoung opened the wooden door, still creaking, though not as much as the previous gate. Sooyoung carefully sneaked her head from the door to examine the situation.

 

“I think the ground’s clear. But try to reach the main building as fast as we can, okay? I don’t want to risk the chance of meeting the patrolling guard.”

 

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yeonniestan94 #1
Coming back to reread this. For a moment i thought the story was deleted because i search for this on the jessica tag. Kekeke...
Found it finally thanks to Haesica😀😀
Macaroonssi
#2
its 2021 and I'm stil here so.....
aseulmonsta
#3
❤️
gyuhyeon #4
I'm here again for the nth times. This is my fav fanfic ever! I used to dislike sugen pairing but this fanfic brought a new light. Pinboo, could you please sign this story up for a drama please? It will be daebak really.
bwtplove
#5
Chapter 50: This chapter will always traumatized me. Imagine to encounter something like that as child..... :(
bwtplove
#6
Chapter 38: I thought Sunny x Sungmin's side story will be my fav one...but after reading Kibum's story....I guess the ranking change. I could understand the hatred he has toward his family so well. It's such an emotional story to me and the way the poor always have a big heart than the rich....you really did a great job at interpreting this.
LeiLeiLeiLeiLeiLei #7
Hi there! I actually read this fic when I was younger, and I wanna reread it but it's members only :(

I have long forgotten my old AFF account....... AHH how do I reread? hehe
shiningshawol13
#8
Hi! I don't know if you'll be able to see this comment, but yeah, just gonna share my thoughts here hahaha.

So I reread Project: Cupid and Der Marchenclub earlier this week because I've been feeling nostalgic lately and thought, hey, maybe I could reread my favorite Super Generation fanfics coz why not?

And well, I'd just like to say that your works remain to be one of my favorites. It's been years since you've published this, years since I've first read it (early 2015). I could still remember the times when I read a chapter or two in between classes back in college, struggling not to give in to the urge to read them while in class hahaha! This is the first time in a long while that I read it again but everything is still as wonderful and impactful as when I first read it.

Der Marchenclub, in particular, is my favorite Super Generation fanfic. Reading it again cemented that fact in my mind. I loveeeee the plot! In particular, I love how you utilized previously uttered lines and details, smoothly tying a to b. I love the flow of the narration, I know you must've hit some rough blocks, too, but in the end, the writing is just superb: the balance between the dialogue and narration is very nice. I love the characterizations and how utterly realistic and imperfect and humane there are (Heechul's my fave haha), though I agree that there are some characters you could've developed more (Yoona and Siwon, for instance, as you mentioned in yuor DMC blog haha). Overall though, I'd go so far as to say that your work is a masterpiece. I took my time re-reading it again, took my time to appreciate the smoothness in the flow, the humanity of the characters, the thrill of solving the mystery. Every single scene played out in my head, and I could perfectly picture Super Generation here (man, I miss them!). This story, the whole plot, it's a very good material for a TV series, that's how good it is.

It's also good in inspiring people. This fanfiction, your fanfiction - it reignited my desire to write again. These past few years I've been stuck in a slump, probably because of the combined stress from my personal and college life, plus the slightly growing distance from kpop, that I wasn't able to continue any of my stories here at all. I even find it hard to write anything because I began to doubt myself. Whenever I type something up, I ended up not finishing it or just erasing it because it feels off. I've graduated now though haha, so college's one factor off the things stressing me out, but I still didn't dare try to write again. At least, not until I read your stories again.

Der Marchenclub (and Project: Cupid!) reminded me of my love for YoonHae, for HeeSica, for SNSD and Super Junior, and most of all, my love for writing. It made me want to try writing again, mostly about YoonHae and HeeSica hahaha!

So I wanted to say thank you. Thank you for creating Der Marchenclub, thank you for creating your stories, and thank you most of all, for sharing it with us and not deleting it. A few days ago I tried searching again some of my favorite YoonHae fanfics, I can't remember their exact titles but what I know is that it's on livejournal (and soon remembered that it's written by muffinmaverick, if you know her hehe). However, I found out that she deleted her account, which means that even her stories were deleted. It suffices to say that I was utterly devastated. Fanfictions are some of my ways of coping even back then, so to find out that I could no longer read them again really pained me. I know the author must have her reasons, and she has all the right to delete her own account and works, but it still hurt. So really, thank you for keeping this precious works here in this site, thank you for sharing it with us still.

I think I'm kinda rambling at this point haha but what I want to say is that your works have inspired me again, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. I'm sure there are other readers out there, too who were inspired to hone or jumpstart their craft after reading your stories. So once again, I would like to say thank you to you. I'm still not very confident, I'm still doubting my skill but well, that can be honed and what's important is that I'm trying again, right? Haha.

Anyways, I miss seeing Super Junior and SNSD together, and reading Der Marchenclub again made me very nostalgic. I'm not that active here in asianfanfics nowadays but I think there are fewer and fewer Super Generation stories now, which I admit breaks my SONELF heart a little. I think it's fitting, though, since our idols have grown more and are living their own lives now, and we're living our own. It won't stop me from writing about them, though haha! If you ever get back to writing again (and I hope you do, I miss reading your stories!), I hope you know that there will still be people who'll welcome you back, and readers who will read your works.

Once again, thank you for writing!! Thank you for bringing Der Marchenclub and your other works to light, and for sharing it with us. :) It's rough in our world right now due to the pandemic but I hope you'll stay safe!