Geirald the Coward

Der Märchenclub
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Chapter 11

[Geirald the Coward]

 

“It’s no use. Her feet and arms are chained to the cement beneath the pond. We have to find someone to break her chain first,” Kibum gave his comment to Donghae. Donghae was about to lift Seohyun’s body, but Kibum’s words halted his movement.

 

Seohyun’s body remained beneath the tranquil water. Pain was not (or no longer) visible on her pale face. Donghae gritted his teeth. He never knew about Seohyun that much, but he knew she was a good girl with a pure heart. He stared at the mocking white feather floating on the surface of the water.

 

White Feather.

 

Donghae averted his eyes from the scene. Thinking that somebody had the heart, no, the lack of it, to do it made him sick. He then stared back at Kibum. “Call somebody to break the chain then. We can’t let her like this.”

 

“Eunhyuk Hyung already called the police,” explained Kibum.

 

Yuri’s voice cracked when she questioned the truth that nobody truly wanted to accept. “So Seohyun is…dead?”

 

Kibum sighed. “Judging from the color of her lips, there was a high probability she was drowned there for more than an hour. What other possibility could arise?”

 

Nobody could answer. Nobody wanted to answer.

 

Sobs from the ladies broke the silence of the night. Sooyoung was probably the most vocal about it, as her sobs turned to wails of misery. Tiffany fainted. A lady named Kim Hyoyeon had run towards the bathroom, possibly to let out the content of her stomach.

 

Jessica was stunned, standing like a rock on its spot.

 

The police siren was heard from a far. Not so long after, the police officials crowded the scene. Two polices were breaking the chain that bound Seohyun to the bottom of the pond and together they all lifted her lifeless body up and laid it on the ground beside the pond.

 

The members of Der Märchenclub were soon requested by the police to gather around in one room. In a convoy, the ladies and gentlemen returned back to the Bluebeard Chamber. They all sat in silence. The police was interrogating Park Jung Soo as the Manager of the club. Three young police were placed inside the Bluebeard Chamber, although none made any actions.

 

Silence.

 

Tick.

 

Tock.

 

Do you enjoy the game thus far?

 

Tick.

 

To –

 

Anxiety reached the limit and one male member of Der Märchenclub angrily slammed his wine glass onto the table. Sounds of broken shards nearly echoed in the room. Sunny, who sat beside Jessica, gasped in surprise. Jessica weakly looked at the trembling Sunny, before she averted her attention towards the person who attempted to create the scene.

 

It turned out to be a man named Shin Dong Hee, although Jessica often heard him to be referred as Shindong. She was not close to him (well, she was not close to anybody), but she often witnessed how Shindong’s role was usually to be the mood lifter of the group. Perhaps it had something to do with his chubby cheeks, his bowl-cut chestnut hair, and his rather large body proportion that just made him looked like the usual good, smiling guy. However the smiling guy was no longer there. He was replaced with this furious-looking, insecure young man.

 

“Shindong Hyung, just sit down,” spoke a man who had a deep voice. Jessica learned to memorize it as Choi Siwon’s voice.

 

“No,” Shindong firmly asserted. “This is not funny anymore. I quit.”

 

“What?” someone asked.

 

“I quit!” he yelled throughout the room. “I quit this ing club!”

 

A man with bright blonde hair rose to his feet and tried to calm Shindong. “Hyung, you can’t do that. We’re still bound by the rules of this game –“

 

“Game?! Hyukjae, you seriously are still thinking about the game?! Are you all that blinded with money and authorities?! Don’t you ever care of your own life?!” shouted Shindong in frustration. “ this. You are all… you are all…sick.”

 

“Hyung… come on, just sit down first. You’re just…panicked. We are all. But –“

 

“I’m not risking my life for this,” declared Shindong.

 

“Seohyun’s death probably doesn’t even have anything to do with this club! You know that she’s the daughter of a mafia family. She knows, well, we all know that her life is never safe ever since she was born!” argued Eunhyuk.

 

“I don’t care,” announced Shindong. He grabbed his car’s key from the wooden table and walked out of the club. Donghae almost rose to help Eunhyuk in calming the outraged male, but Shindong suddenly halted his steps. Hesitation colored his movement, but…the hell, he had nothing to lose anyway. Having that thought affirmed in his head, Shindong then slid his hand inside his suit’s pocket to take out a piece of folded paper. He then tossed it to Eunhyuk’s chest.

 

Eunhyuk’s eyes darted from Shindong to the folded paper back and forth. Eventually, the blond-haired guy decided to unfold the paper. His breath hitched upon noticing what the content was.

 

It was the invitation.

 

The similar one which he had received as his entry pass card into this club.

 

Dear –

 

“The Ugly Duckling,” Shindong snickered. “If you’re all still interested in playing the game, there, I give you a free hint. My role is as The Ugly Duckling.”

 

The whole room was silenced, but in contrary, Shindong laughed maniacally. “The Ugly Duckling!!” he exclaimed as if it was the most hilarious joke he had ever heard. “This ing club already sets me as a joke from the very beginning! Why? Because I’m fat?! Because I’m ugly?!!”

 

“Hyung…” Donghae took more steps to support his best friend, Hyukjae, but Shindong roughly shoved his hand away.

 

“Don’t touch me,” Shindong warned Donghae. “I…I don’t want to have anything to do with any of you anymore,” he declared. And with that, he turned around towards the door. The young policemen tried to prev

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yeonniestan94 #1
Coming back to reread this. For a moment i thought the story was deleted because i search for this on the jessica tag. Kekeke...
Found it finally thanks to Haesica😀😀
Macaroonssi
#2
its 2021 and I'm stil here so.....
aseulmonsta
#3
❤️
gyuhyeon #4
I'm here again for the nth times. This is my fav fanfic ever! I used to dislike sugen pairing but this fanfic brought a new light. Pinboo, could you please sign this story up for a drama please? It will be daebak really.
bwtplove
#5
Chapter 50: This chapter will always traumatized me. Imagine to encounter something like that as child..... :(
bwtplove
#6
Chapter 38: I thought Sunny x Sungmin's side story will be my fav one...but after reading Kibum's story....I guess the ranking change. I could understand the hatred he has toward his family so well. It's such an emotional story to me and the way the poor always have a big heart than the rich....you really did a great job at interpreting this.
LeiLeiLeiLeiLeiLei #7
Hi there! I actually read this fic when I was younger, and I wanna reread it but it's members only :(

I have long forgotten my old AFF account....... AHH how do I reread? hehe
shiningshawol13
#8
Hi! I don't know if you'll be able to see this comment, but yeah, just gonna share my thoughts here hahaha.

So I reread Project: Cupid and Der Marchenclub earlier this week because I've been feeling nostalgic lately and thought, hey, maybe I could reread my favorite Super Generation fanfics coz why not?

And well, I'd just like to say that your works remain to be one of my favorites. It's been years since you've published this, years since I've first read it (early 2015). I could still remember the times when I read a chapter or two in between classes back in college, struggling not to give in to the urge to read them while in class hahaha! This is the first time in a long while that I read it again but everything is still as wonderful and impactful as when I first read it.

Der Marchenclub, in particular, is my favorite Super Generation fanfic. Reading it again cemented that fact in my mind. I loveeeee the plot! In particular, I love how you utilized previously uttered lines and details, smoothly tying a to b. I love the flow of the narration, I know you must've hit some rough blocks, too, but in the end, the writing is just superb: the balance between the dialogue and narration is very nice. I love the characterizations and how utterly realistic and imperfect and humane there are (Heechul's my fave haha), though I agree that there are some characters you could've developed more (Yoona and Siwon, for instance, as you mentioned in yuor DMC blog haha). Overall though, I'd go so far as to say that your work is a masterpiece. I took my time re-reading it again, took my time to appreciate the smoothness in the flow, the humanity of the characters, the thrill of solving the mystery. Every single scene played out in my head, and I could perfectly picture Super Generation here (man, I miss them!). This story, the whole plot, it's a very good material for a TV series, that's how good it is.

It's also good in inspiring people. This fanfiction, your fanfiction - it reignited my desire to write again. These past few years I've been stuck in a slump, probably because of the combined stress from my personal and college life, plus the slightly growing distance from kpop, that I wasn't able to continue any of my stories here at all. I even find it hard to write anything because I began to doubt myself. Whenever I type something up, I ended up not finishing it or just erasing it because it feels off. I've graduated now though haha, so college's one factor off the things stressing me out, but I still didn't dare try to write again. At least, not until I read your stories again.

Der Marchenclub (and Project: Cupid!) reminded me of my love for YoonHae, for HeeSica, for SNSD and Super Junior, and most of all, my love for writing. It made me want to try writing again, mostly about YoonHae and HeeSica hahaha!

So I wanted to say thank you. Thank you for creating Der Marchenclub, thank you for creating your stories, and thank you most of all, for sharing it with us and not deleting it. A few days ago I tried searching again some of my favorite YoonHae fanfics, I can't remember their exact titles but what I know is that it's on livejournal (and soon remembered that it's written by muffinmaverick, if you know her hehe). However, I found out that she deleted her account, which means that even her stories were deleted. It suffices to say that I was utterly devastated. Fanfictions are some of my ways of coping even back then, so to find out that I could no longer read them again really pained me. I know the author must have her reasons, and she has all the right to delete her own account and works, but it still hurt. So really, thank you for keeping this precious works here in this site, thank you for sharing it with us still.

I think I'm kinda rambling at this point haha but what I want to say is that your works have inspired me again, and I'm sure I'm not the only one. I'm sure there are other readers out there, too who were inspired to hone or jumpstart their craft after reading your stories. So once again, I would like to say thank you to you. I'm still not very confident, I'm still doubting my skill but well, that can be honed and what's important is that I'm trying again, right? Haha.

Anyways, I miss seeing Super Junior and SNSD together, and reading Der Marchenclub again made me very nostalgic. I'm not that active here in asianfanfics nowadays but I think there are fewer and fewer Super Generation stories now, which I admit breaks my SONELF heart a little. I think it's fitting, though, since our idols have grown more and are living their own lives now, and we're living our own. It won't stop me from writing about them, though haha! If you ever get back to writing again (and I hope you do, I miss reading your stories!), I hope you know that there will still be people who'll welcome you back, and readers who will read your works.

Once again, thank you for writing!! Thank you for bringing Der Marchenclub and your other works to light, and for sharing it with us. :) It's rough in our world right now due to the pandemic but I hope you'll stay safe!