Chapter 17- Going for a Picnic
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by Kimyunjae
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Yunho felt really weird as suddenly Changmin suggested them to go for a picnic.
Yunho: what the hell are you going to do by picnic?
Changmin: err..hyung will know it later..
Yunho: tell me now..
Changmin: no..I’ll tell you when we get there..
Yoochun: aish..whatever..but now just pack our things..
Yunho: weird..this Yoochun also go there?
Changmin: of course..Junsu also there..
Yunho: so five of us are there altogether?
Changmin: yeah..
Yunho: I thought only me and Jaejoong!!
Changmin: pabo hyung! He won’t agree if only you and him..
Yunho: yeah..you’re right..
Changmin: then faster and pack your things..
Yunho & Yoochun: okay boss!!
Changmin: good..and I need to bring my DVD collections..
Yunho: yah Min! we’re going at the mountain right? Why you need to bring these things?
Changmin: err..sometimes we need it..
Yunho: I think there’s just tiger there will be horny!!
Changmin: yeah..tigers like you guys!!
Yunho & Yoochun: what did you say Changmin??
Changmin: err..just kidding..
Changmin took out his camera and smirked.
As they were packing their things,Changmin went downstairs and saw Jaejoong’s luggage.
Changmin: woah..earlier than these tigers..
Jaejoong: tiger?
Junsu: that tigers must be Yunho and Yoochun..
Changmin: hihihi..yeah..
Jaejoong shook his head and smiled as he saw Yunho was carrying his heavy luggage.
Changmin: yah! aren’t we just go there for 3 days? Seem like you guys decide to stay there for a year.
Yunho: I can stay there for a thousand year with Jaejoong.
Jaejoong glared at him and looked away.
Yoochun: mee too..if I have SuSu there..then I won’t be worry if I had to hunt tigers for your food..
Junsu: what??
Changmin: err..I bless you guys..
Yunho: what do you mean?? You seem weird..
Yoochun: yeah..are you planning something on us?
Changmin: eh? N..no.
Yunho: if you do something bad to us..we’re going to chop your head off..
Changmin: err..no..I never plan something bad on you guys..
Yunho: then let’s move..
Changmin grinned as he got into Yunho’s car. Yunho at the drive seat,Yoochun beside him,and the rest were at the back.
Changmin looked at both Junsu and Jaejoong and grinned.
Junsu: you’re not planning something bad on us right?
Changmin: of course not..
Jaejoong: I trust Changmin.
Junsu: but I don’t trust him..maybe he’s bad like his cousin..
Yunho: what did you say Junsu??
Yoochun: err Yunho..don;t be mad to my Suie..
Jaejoong: y..yes..don’t be angry with my little brother.
Yunho: mm..of course not Jae..I’m just asking..
Jaejoong: but your voice harsh and scared him..
Yunho: I can speak with low tone if you want..
Jaejoong: it’s better than you angry with anyone..
Yunho smiled and didn’t talk anything. He liked to see Jaejoong angry.
Yunho: Jae..did you bring extra pants?
Jaejoong: no.
Yunho: aish.I forget to bring it.
Changmin: then turn back to take it..
Yunho: aish..we’re at the highway now..
Changmin: opps..sowrie..forget.
Yoochun: you can lend mine if you want..
Yunho: lend yours? Ewwww..
Yunho made disgusted face.
Yoochun: yah! my size just like your size!!
Yunho: no..I mean I don’t want to touch yours with mine indirectly..
Yoochun: what do you mean?
Yunho: Now I remember..you used to wash your pants just once in a month..
Yoochun: aish..you knew it.
Junsu: ewwww..so disgusting!!
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happy2992 on says:
Yoochun: I can’t take bath anymore..
Yunho: I know..because the weather getting cold nowadays..
lol....soo funny...loved your story...good job...hahahhahahahhahaha
BubbleCutie on says:
Nice ending :)) freakin funny xD thanks for watching our precious moment haha xD
nurulamelia on says:
hahahaha.. this is truly funny!! lol
i cant stop laughing, hihi
the ending is unpredictable for changmin XD
happy_girl89 on says:
great ending..haha...looking for a sequel for kimin^_^
dubujeje on says:
Great ending! LOL, changmin xD
signorina_klutz on says:
I hope you don't mind me reviewing the story. If so, forgive me!
The plot was great, but in my opinion, the story was too fast paced? I mean, Jaejoong wants to take revenge to Yunho, but then, after a few days, he already forgive him. Then, on the first part, it was like Jaejoong was so innocent, but then, when they're having _____, Jaejoong seems to be professional. (LOL. Sorry for the term, can't think of any. XD)
Yunho, after seeing Changmin with Jaejoong, wanted to get Jae as soon as possible, didn't he must see a lot of JaeMin action first before regretting? But then, the whole story was great, and the ending was so funny. Good job! :)
nanaiman on says:
woah!! "our wet dream" haha daebakk!!
saranghaey on says:
hahahaha! "its our wet dream"
JewElfNita on says:
lol kimin... cute minie>.<
kurogane on says:
that's really funny, minnie.
haha...
sunkyu for sharing and update!^^
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