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you're beautifull season 2
by soshi5
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yongseo
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yongseo seohyun yonghwa A.N.JELL
Description
characters :
hwang tae kyung :
the leader of A.N.JELL boyband
talented
charming
husband of mi nyu
jeremy ( hongki ):
the band's drummer
charming
handsome
and the childich cute member
shin woo (jung yonghwa )
the band's guitariste
mysterious guy
handsome
charming
can melt a thousand girls hearts with his smile
seo joohyun :
snsd's maknae
sweetest member
innocent
pretty
smart
cute
had all things that mae her the ideal type of many guys idols and normal ones
fallen for yonghwa head over heals
ko mi nyu ( park shin hye ) :
a lovely girl
pretty
cute
the wife of taekyung
the sister of ko mi nam
made shinwoo & jeremy suffer by loving her
ko mi nam :
A.N.JELL's pianist
had an angelic voice
charming
lovely
charismatic
mi nyu's brother
Foreword
i think everyone know and had watched the famous korean drama you're beautifull how a girl called ko mi nyu ( park shin hye ) got into a boyband called A.N.JELL as a boy for the sake of her twin brother ko mi nam then her bandmates found out about her and fall for her but in the end she choosed the leader taekyung ( jang geun suk) and the others accept it and let them love each others
shinwoo ( jung yong hwa ) her bandmate found out about her real sex ( a girl ) and fall for her , he tried to confess to hr by many ways but he failed but when she choosed taekyung he let go of her but he didn't stop loving her he tried but he couldn't suddenly seohyun got into his life she confused him by her acts toward him she was avoiding him being cold in talking to him she treated him completly diffrent from his bandmates she was sweet and lovable toward them they adored her so much too
the fact that she somehow knew that he love mi nyu which broke her heart because she loved him since so long and waited for the best timing to confess but her plans had canceled the night she knew about his love that's why she acted like that
can she will be able to have his heart ???
would he give up on mi nyu's love and love back seohyun ?
we'll find out just read my story and you'll know
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WuLhanPark on says about chapter 41:
huuaaaa.. you're back!!!
i miss this story so much..
kyaaaa!! hyun 2 months pregnant ?? aigooo.. jung baby will come.. yongseo baby will come.. kkkkk
yo~ng.. kkkk
vielovegoguma on says about chapter 41:
Finally a sweet chapter update \(^.^)/
Yong must be happy to know Hyun is pregnant with his baby... i wanna see his shock expression when he heard this news kkkk...
jinjja.. two months pregnant??? they're really can't wait until their wedding night ckckckck..LOL
update soon..
cookie96 on says:
Omg I found your story a long time ago but because of the aff problem I lost it and I tried to find it again but it didn't work. Now that I found it I can't believe it is you who was writing the story. Will now I shell go read all the chapters haha.
YSbubu on says:
Yes you're the author and you have all the rights to lead the story. However, as much as it needs angst in any story, too much something is never good and try to put yourself in your readers' shoes to understand their feeling. Be it your favorite genre or not, balance is the key and with a typical plot like this, only a unique writing style and logical plot can make an appeal.
One suggestion is that you should plan your plot from the beginning carefully. It's not like you can insert whatever you feel like in the middle just to add more drama. I'm not a writer but I have a fair share in reading stories so I know what I can expect as the story is going. Dramas only add value to each story if they are conveyed logically and not out of impulse. With the intention to overuse something, it will backfire and let readers frustrated all the time.
TBH, even if YS can have a happy ending, I don't feel like treasure it anymore. Rather than focus too much on the evil character, isn't it better to tell more about their relationship? They are only together for such a short time and there are tons of thing they need to discover about each other. Saying "I love you" is not the only way to get love grow stronger and I wonder how much they know about their partner to reach that far to sacrify for something stupid just like a baseless warning from a crazy man like Kyu. I can really guess where the story is going and if my guess is right, I rather stop reading here since the only one I can get out of the whole story is furstration and unwanted dramas
This is just my advice, you can take it or leave it but seriously, you should consider to tone down angst in all of your other stories as well.
YSbubu on says:
The angst again? Sorry but I can't take it anymore, for the whole 36 chapters, I can only count 1-2 sweet moments and they are not even full of sweetness but always interrupted by others.
Once again, Kyu should go to hell!!!!! And if SH surrendered that easily once more time, so be it, YS should not never ever get back together and let Seokyu rules the world. At least before making the decision, she should ask him first!!!Where is the trust in your bf if you solely act on your own even if it's for his benefit? Didn't she learn the lesson before?
I know I'm kind of frustrated writing all these out but I still stand firm on my opinion
luxubu on says:
Poor YS! even their first day didn't go well as plan. At least SH finally told Kyu about her feeling and I hope his stubborness won't interfere YS once again.
I know you're more comfortable with angst but little romantic moments won't kill the story either. Since there is too much angst for YS already, they deserve some sweetness as a compensation.
tthnguyen on says about chapter 32:
How on earth did people find out where they were??
seoshi on says about chapter 32:
its update^^
cant wait for the next update
BOICEGIRL on says:
Hello soshi5 chingu hehehe
Yeah I'm here and I read the whole story, there's still only chap 13, I haven't read it yet...
I love the story and the idea of the story because I'm a big fan of Shinwoo character and Yongseo so wow this story is great !! The way you write is really nice I love it kkk
Acyually I'm still innocent so I skip the hot parts kkk regardless that, you're awesome chingu !!
liwayway on says:
This story is really charming and funny.
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