The Thirteenth (rewrite)

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Description

Gais was once a beautiful and peaceful world, until disaster struck and a war broke out between the Exotrians and the Sujuans. The Exotrian princess was killed as were many of her warriors, but the few who survived had gone into a deep sleep. Five-hundred years under to rule of the Sujuans had put a strain on the land and demons were now roaming more than they had before. Gais was about to be brought into the whirlpool of chaos once again, and the only hope was the return of the Exotrian warriors and their princess. The deep sleep is about to be broken.

(This is a rewrite of my story The Thirteenth, though this will actually be following my original plan for the story with some small changes. I felt the need to rewrite this because my style of writing has changed, and because I wanted this story to be how I originally thought of it. This will not be a reverse-harem, though there will be cute scenes with all the members. I hope you support my decision, and maybe when this is finished I'll go and finish writing the other one.)

Warning- Some swearing and a lot of fighting, especially in later chapters. If this is not your thing then maybe you shouldn't read this. If there is anything really bad I will mark the chapter as rated M.

Disclaimer- The OCs and the plot of this story is my own so please be respectful.

Background of this story and the cover image for Part One was made by eisiam and was used for the original writing of this story. esiam's shop can be found here https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/886446/iych-busy-finishing-requests-graphic-graphics-poster-postershop-graphicshop-portfolio

and my old story can be found here https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1107060/the-thirteenth-angst-fantasy-supernatural-reverseharem-originalcharacter-exo though if you haven't already read this then there will be spoilers.

Foreword

The Legend of Gais

Many hundreds of years ago the world of Gais was one. It was peaceful and it was beautiful, and most inportantly the Tree of Life filled the world with magic. This magic benefited everyone, and was used to help others. However, like all great things, the magic was desired by many who wanted it to be there own. It was only a matter of time before the world was split in two and the tension began.

The Sujuans wanted power and would do anything to obtain the magic, even if that meant murder.

The Exotrians were peaceful and wanted to use the magic to help people.

It was no wonder that the Tree of Life chose to side with the Exotians, but this caused a great anger to grow in the Sujuans. They started to cause chaos, attacking Exotrian villages near the boarder and even setting fire to the forests. In the midst of all this calamity twelve warriors arose, and with the strength given to them by the Exotrian princess and the magic bestowed on them by the Tree of Life, they smited the troublesom Sujuans and the peace returned. The warriors vowed to protect the land and their princess if anything were to happen again.

To this day, the magic of the twelve warriors is passed onto the next generation, and that generation protects not only the land of Exotria but also the princess.

Comments

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123manju #1
Chapter 5: I'm a new reader and read both version and wow I'm really excited to know what happens from here.
E_L_F13
#2
Looking forward to what you have in store for us!! I’m just as excited to read this rewritten version as I was reading the original one : D
Sarahharvell #3
Chapter 5: I love this. Can’t wait for it to over take the chapters I read from the initial draft. Keep up the good work ^*
Astriana #4
Chapter 4: Lmao she's in her pj's but none of the other people around are wondering wtf she's wearing?
FanficLover36
#5
Chapter 3: I always hate when Chanyeol is mean
Jeoni_jungkook
#6
:}
G_Ra116
#7
I still interested with your stories & as a reader, I'll always respect the writer. It's not easy to deliver your story ideas to audience, but with your writing skills I really appreciate your works :)
FanficLover36
#8
I love ur other fic but I think I might give this one a chance too
aqualili
#9
I'm looking forward to your rewrite version of thirteen keep up the good work...