TCR: even though it's incomplete, but i really have no stopped thinking about this story. taking a break, yes, but words and ideas float about in my head on how to really go about this story. so... i'll reveal all that i've written so far even if they're all still incomplete. [211116]
hello. i changed some things. hopefully it's not that big of a change for you to change the story for sherryl is you've written her stuff already. i just been thinking about it until i saw your notice and made some revisions. sorry and thanks!
Chapter 26: Oh how I wish that I could be that lucky to see a shooting star at 11:11 and have my wish automatically come true! hahahahaha I love how this turned out. I honestly didn't expect Jisoo's arc to be the next one and I'm already trying to guess who's next!
Chapter 26: I saw the notification on my phone about this story being updated this morning(in my country) but I wasn't able to read it since I had to get to school cause I woke up late hahaha. But thankfully I was able to read it during our break time and I must say I didn't expect it to be another applicant's mini-arc. I was very surprised but at the same time I liked it since it allows everyone to take a look at the different mini-arcs of each character while not having to wait for one to finish.
Chapter 26: Oh yass!! Jisoo's arc woooh! I love how her introvertedness was somewhat the focus of this part since I have a feeling it will play a big part in her development in the coming chapters. I really like this chapter and how she was introduced! Nice work!
Chapter 25: Can I just first say that I loved these chapters??? They’re great! And also, so sorry I haven’t been commenting lately! Anyways, I think you portrayed Kyungeun just fine :) I’m super excited for the rest of the mini arcs, and the main arc is just so compelling! Great job!!
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