Heaven

Description

Taehyung meets Jeongguk in a small 80s bar where time stays frozen, and can't bear the thought of leaving him behind forever. 

Heave, is where we are together. 

Foreword

San Junipero is my favorite episode of Black Mirror...

Haven't watched it? Take a look at the fic and I'll explain everything after the ending. See if you get it right ;P

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kimVjkook #1
Chapter 1: wow.. great imagination. I didnt understand the artificial body part. I mean how jungkook came back to life?
Olepsis #2
Chapter 1: The first two sections were boring to read because there was more telling than showing and some of your sentences were clunky but once Jimin came into play, the story really picked it up. I felt energized to continue reading. I liked how you gave the focus to Jungkook as opposed to Taehyung because like you mentioned in the author note, this is a story about the "what if's" as opposed to the "what would you do?". My FAVORITE paragraph is when you were describing what Jungkook was seeing in his body for the first time outside of Junipero. That was fantastic. Overall, apart from needing to focus less on the narrator's voice (let the characters words and actions speak for themselves), you did a good job of writing this out. You'll be sure to see growth if you continue writing so good luck author!
Olepsis #3
Chapter 1: Holy fook. For a second there the last sentence caught me offguard; I thought they were both dead but than I remembered reading an article saying San Junipero was the ONLY episode to end on an uplifting note.
peggyw #4
Chapter 1: Like what you did with this; never watched the program you are referring to, but I prefer reading anyway, so ty for the adaptation!
Olepsis #5
I skipped out on San Junipero because thought it wouldn't live up to my taste. On that note, let's read...
AkKookie #6
Chapter 1: This is really touching.....i love it♡♡
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