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i might be abandoning this collection thingy. i'll just post my stories separately.

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cjmoo_ #1 Apr 15, 2018 07:50:06

Chapter 9: Quite a cute one-shot! It felt awkward reading the kissing scenes because it's between Chanyeol and Yongsun ahaha

cjmoo_ #2 Apr 15, 2018 07:47:22

Chapter 8: The ending did feel a little bit rushed, but it's all good. Glad that their friendship is still okay!

cjmoo_ #3 Apr 15, 2018 07:44:36

Chapter 7: Didn't expect this story to turn out this way :O

cjmoo_ #4 Apr 15, 2018 07:40:22

Chapter 5: I feel that you're improving chapter by chapter too! I like the paragraph which starts with 'They just naturally sat there (...)'.

Benjiro #5 Feb 19, 2018 06:15:09

Chapter 8: It was okay. But glad I read it tho. I would love to read more of your stories.

Benjiro #6 Feb 13, 2018 00:55:28

Chapter 7: Bruh I don't know. I like them both. But i lean more to the twisted plot bacuse I'm twisted like that. Lol but I think it would leave some good cliffhangers later on to make readers want more.

Moonbyulismine98 #7 Feb 12, 2018 17:48:48

Chapter 7: The normal one.The plot twist seem like abnormal story for me.

xxwydxx #8 Feb 11, 2018 19:08:22

Chapter 7: normal one is good :)

paechymilk #9 Feb 11, 2018 12:56:34

Chapter 7: i prefer the non plot twist version over the plot twist. the normal one is good.

Addlyka #10 Feb 11, 2018 12:53:14

Chapter 7: Drama with plot twist definitely!!!!