Chapter 13: YOOOO I forgot to comment on this but akjlsdnla
I'm dying Halsey would be me "nah man this isn't real" and just nope the outta there LOL
I do like how there's a lot of characters that are mentioned even though they aren't the main characters, it's really well thought out !!
LOLOL "Adopted, I assume." Lily was very asian and Theo was a pasty white. Me: damn u right tho
ANYWAYS, I loooove the way you're setting this up: there's a focus on the powers but a lot of the story is structured through the girl's lives and perspectives!!
I'm really excited to see the other girls thoughts in the next one ~

Will read the new update soon!! ^^

Chapter 12: There is so much to take in (lol!)
My favorite part was when they transformed. Even though I can't really imagine what their clothes looked like, the colors!! Gray, blue, green, red and pink. It corresponds to their respective elements so it's very interesting for me especially since I couldn't get it at first. Lily's hair!! And Halsey's and Phil's!! I like the idea that their hair can change color and style's when they transform. I also like how in the beginning you managed to pull off a TON of cameos. And I had been stalking other people's apps before but I kind of forgotten what their character looked like @_@ so it'd be neat if, in the future, reoccurring characters could have their own page (?) not that it's needed but... my goldfish memory... Honestly, I thought finding the heart would come in a bit later so I was surprised when they all met each other so soon LMAO. It's always so funny when everyone is so gung-ho about stuff and Halsey's just like "no pls". The beginning was so W.I.T.C.H-like that I imagined the scenes as if they were in comic panels ahhh @ w @ man this chapter was good! And I don't know why, but them finding the storage just like that makes me think if there wasn't only one other person who could have found the tear in space before them. I'm excited about what will be happening next ^__^

Chapter 12: Aju nice~ (❁´▽`❁)*✲ﾟ*

Chapter 12: dude.... wicked. lol
it's a great first start and yeah first chapters are nightmare. XD
anyways... i forgot who said it, but they ended up on the latter of the anime world's part of becoming magical and saving the world. lol
definitely can't wait for their friendship development as well as how they'll be able to get through everything.
good luck with the future chapters!! =]

Chapter 12: COMMENCE THE CLAPPY HANDS
IM SCREAAMINGGGGG

Chapter 12: gIORL I'M HERE THIS IS CUTE AND AMAZING
MY BABY LILY OUT HERE AND THEO IS PERFECT
THEY'RE ALL PERFECT
THANK U YOU'VE MADE MY DAY

Okay. Will read soon!! Am on vacay atm. Lol but whoo!!

Chapter 8: WOOOOOOOOT!! YASSSSS!!!

Super stoked for this and can't wait for the shenanigans to start!