Power From Within

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Hyuna was locked up because of her power, with food slipped in through a small hole in the wall. Day after day she survives it, but might just give into dispair. Will she ever escape? 

Foreword

This story was written for the Multi-Fandom Secret Santa! 

It's also entered into Mini Writing Contests! (#1 and #2 are open). You should go enter! 

 I would like to thank Cherry Dragon Shop for the beautiful poster and background♡. 

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TaeHyunaRedLove #1
Chapter 1: Well, that was heart-warming. What a beautiful way to end a one-shot. Good job, author. Tho i did hope this was a bit longer.
baepsemi #2
Chapter 1: First of all, I would like to say thank you for putting an effort and simply participating in this event. It says a lot about you as a human being, and so even before I touch the subject of the story I'd like to thank you for all of your hard work.

And oh what a story this is.

First of all, the writing style is such a delight to read. From the very first sentence, everything is absolutely beautiful (" creating a cold layer of happiness for the children to play in and adding a fresh, crispness to the air." - that was the line that got me hooked. You can actually feel the coldness of the snow in the words, and yet there is a hint of childish naivety and happiness that radiates off of them as well. Fantastically done).

Second of all, the plot. Oh I love superpower stories, you have no idea. You hit the bullseye with this one, and it may have made be biased from the very start ^^" I absolutely adore the progression of the story - first you see Hyuna, just simple regular Hyuna watching the snow, and you have no idea what is going on. And then the first bomb drops, and suddenly everything is clear (only it's not, and that's what makes this one-shot so compelling). It could've been simply a one-shot exploring the struggle of a girl with powers and her friend (who she totally doesn't like pfffft nope not at all - I may be shipping HyuJin way too much right now ^^"), but you've put another twist to it. An actual struggle. The cage. I will let you know that I get absolutely frustrated when protagonists do stupid things when bad things happen to them, and I was absolutely delighted that Hyuna was actually being smart about it all. I may have been squealing from joy but shhh don't tell anyone. And then the final revelation happens, and everything is good again. A perfect ending to a perfect one-shot. So wholesome and fantastic and christmasy. I love it.

Thank you. Thank you for this kind present. It made my holidays even more festive, and I am happy that I now know another amazing author to follow!

Merry Christmas, happy holidays, and a happy new year!
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