THE WAR

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Jiyeon was forced to marry a ruthless warrior who doesn’t even love her.

 

"Then we should lie about her identity. I’m going to have her one way or another. If i have to lie to world for that beauty so be it.”

The younger’s expression darkened to furry. "Don’t you understand?! You are lusting over her, it’s not love! You won’t even treat her right if you’re only going to have her because she’s beautiful.”

Sehun looked up and his face was full embodiment of evil. "Well, i won’t dare to say otherwise. I want her because of her appearance. Treating her right, like her doesn’t deserve this. You of all people should know. The only reason i want her because she’s beautiful and would sure fulfill my needs. That’s what i want, nothing more or less.” Sehun rising on his feet start walking to the exit.

Foreword

Title: The War.

Genre: Drama, against, violence.

Warning: Ancient time when women were treated unfairly; a much hated Sehun and a sad story.

Length: Six Chapters.

The name war isn’t taken from exo album, I’ve written this story a year ago and because it basically revolves around war so I named it like this. It’s even completed but I’m going to write it in chapters.

If you’re sensitive towards women unfair treatment, I say you think twice before reading this… or don’t at all. I was personally feeling bad writing this… the old beliefs and so on but I really wanted to write something like this because of all the animes I used to watch in my early teenage years. Anyway whose going to read this, I’m thankful to you and whose not- I understand that too. Oh it’s also a sad story… It’s only going to get worse and worse so hope you won’t be mad at the ending.

I like Sehun’s armor on the poster, it’s so cool and the one Sehun would be wearing in the story is same too. I think it’s from skyrim.

Poster

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Background

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Hope you guys like this story.

 

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Chocoseunie #1
Chapter 6: The rollercoaster of emotions I had while reading this jfc this is so good and beautiful
ackerwoman #2
Chapter 6: Finally, I finished the whole book. Congratulations and thumbs up for writing such a beautiful masterpiece, packed with so many lessons we all can learn from. When I first read the foreword chapter, I was oblivious of the male lead's persona and I refused to say his name because I had grudges and is still mad upon the whole situation haha I'm a childish adult.

If I can put his positive and negative quality side to side, you will see a never-ending list for the latter as he is no better than an . He's straight-up despicable and abusive, there's a perfect word in Malay that could explain his character. It's called dayus. Yes, perfect for him. But I guess Jiyeon was really made for him because he could give her only a good reason to stay and she would listen and ignore the other million reasons why she shouldn't.

Other than several typos, the wrong choice of words(For instance, you used 'tough' instead of 'taught') and a few grammatical errors here and there, I think you've made a really good job publishing and writing this masterpiece. Do view these as constructive criticism rather than mindless words to bring you down alright?

To be honest war-themed book is difficult to write, I'm very well aware of that but you have conquered the fight scenes really really well and I'm not even kidding. The details are written with precision and each move ignites emotions while portraying the scenes done by the characters. That amazed me so so much I didn't dare to interrupt my reading to write the comments in the comment section. Just one thing bothered me if only you could write what actually happened to all of the guy's loved ones. That would be superb, but I am not complaining. I love the ending.

Overall, this is a masterpiece and the ending just slapped the guy face really hard so I'm satisfied. I hope that finally realized how his reckless behaviours had caused his loved one's agonies and misery as he lives his remnant years in broken glasses.

Once again, thank you!
ackerwoman #3
Chapter 3: You have no idea how many emotions were brought up through this chapter only. I'm late but kudos for writing such a emotional wrecked book!
montiniiz #4
Chapter 6: Such a pretty sad story. No one are the real winner in any war. :(
ktak_dbwh_tempurung #5
Chapter 6: man, im crying
aftermidnight265 #6
Chapter 6: This is so sad :(
All war stories are so sad
alwaysAi #7
Start to ship jiyeon x sehun thanks to your story.
Love your story.
This chapter is just so emotional to read.

Another seyeon story please. But maybe a sweet nice happy ending story? XD
jiyeonasmaa #8
Chapter 6: Please another story of seyeon
jiyeonasmaa #9
Chapter 6: This is so emotional i love it so much
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