Thanks for being my first commentator Lemlouma. Also, thanks for giving such a detailed comment. I really appreciate your kind words and take them to heart.
I'm actually not an art major, but my educational focus does require good writing and communication skills. I'm a law student, surprise! Lol.
Really though, thank you so much for taking the time to give me feedback on my story; it is well-received.
Best wishes,
BelieveNU.

Chapter 1: What an honour, I'll be your first comment ♥️
To start things, I only stumbled upon this because I was having a food break and searched for sth short to read so any one-shot would have been fine but I never would've thought I'd stumble upon such an amazing story. From your use of words and expression I concluded that you are anything but a rookie at writing, if I may take a wild guess you're probably also very artsy~
At least you sounded like a music/art major student ^^ like I said, wild guess.
I really enjoyed reading this story and have to say you have sparked the Jazz in me ♥️
Thanks to this story I already imagined myself listening to Jazz while having a fancy dinner with wine and so I really want to thank you for the talent and lovely effort you put into this. This was a very colourful one-shot and break ♥️♥️♥️
I'll be happy to read more in the future ^-^