Chapter 11: wow this went from cuddly to murderous :o

Chapter 32: OMG!!!!! finally SOME ToP BAEKHYUN Y!!!!!
I NEED more of this! I hope you co continue this some day!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!

Chapter 16: THat was.....so sad.....OMG I need justice for Hunlay lol XD I mean I need to read a happy one now

Chapter 3: That chanxing one OMGGG I need more! I love it!!! XD

Chapter 3: (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ ✧ﾟ･: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)
Gaaaaa my chanxing feels have started acting up again!!!
THIGH KINK!!! YAAAAASS!!

Chapter 21: This is awesome but I'm confuse..the girl with him is not yixing right?

Chapter 18: This chapter is one of my fav. It's so funny and clever

Chapter 18: hu h hskajxnsn I just died, thank you AGAIN!!!
It was so cute, funny, adorable, and y at the SAME TIME!!! How?!??! I don't know!!! I loved it so much, it was adorable and I'm so glad you added that marriage proposalproposal, it was so good!! I loved it!!! Thank you!!!
Also I'm sorry for commenting lately, school is being a douche bag, but I'm free for now!!! Yay!!
Also how are you doing?? Eating enough?? Sleeping enough?? Drinking enough water??
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Chapter 17: I LOVE IT, IT'S SO CUTE, BUT THE ENDING IS SAD, I feel bad for both of them!! You're such a good writer!! You're improving with each of your stories, practice makes perfect!! Great job（*＾3＾）/～♡ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ

Chapter 16: Sjsjsksjskanahzjnsnsjdkdksgaka
Why!?!?!??!?? Why do you keep doing this to me?!??!? My heart can only take so much!!! I'm actually crying right now!!! God this was soooooooooooo good!!!! I love it 327890/10 amazing, top of the class!! Thank you for making these stories that make me cry, smile, and laugh. It's so good!! Please keep up the good work!! Also make sure you're keeping up with your health too. Get enough sleep, drink enough water, and eat your food!!!♡♡♡♡