Free Fall

Description

They got a happy marriage life. Then, all of sudden, Mir lost everything he deemed precious. When did it happen? What went wrong? All of sudden, Joon he used to know was gone, replaced with someone stranger. 

 

 

Foreword

Have you ever anticipating something yet still don’t ready to face it? I have.

 

“Let’s divorce.”

“Alright.”

 

Broken sobs escaped his lips and Mir was too tired to keep it, so he allowed his painful whispers escaped his lips and echoed in the cold room.

 

When exactly the house became a silent witness over their unending argument?

 

He didn’t think Mir still have that effect on him, but hearing his cry next to him, felt like something inside of Joon's die.

 

"Everywhere," he replied. "It's hurting everywhere."

 

Their life built by layers of up and mess, regardless, it was working.

Till the time when pretend was not an option.

 

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Aky_Shiroha #1
Chapter 1: So many feels in this story... You described the emotions so wonderfully well, they kind of sparked over to me.
I can't even begin to understand why Joon cheated on Mir in the first place, why he rejected Mir for one year. Mir really deserves better and Joon has a lot to make up for this. They may still love each other deeply but it is still unclear if they can rebuild the trust that is lost and if Mir can ever forget this obstacle which happened between them. But I guess, Joon unterstands that and he will fight for them. I think, it would be nice if you wrote something like an epilogue where one can see how Mir an Joon act together after overcoming this crisis. It's not necessary though, the story is wonderful as it is, it's just a personal preferance to tie lose ends together ;)
I actually don't know how things are in other countries but in Germany, you can't simply sign some papers and you divorce is done, you have to fulfill some requirement, e.g. having lived apart for a certain timespan... With that, the cicumstances of their potential divorce seemed somehow unrealistic to me...
I smiled at the entrance of Byunghee and Mir actually calling him Hyung, indicating a closer realtionship between those two. It fits him so well to leave these two alone to regain their lost relationship. :)
I also like the title of this story very much, it seems really fitting, especially regarding Mir and his feelings.
Anyway, it's always nice to read an MBLAQ story, especially a good one like this. Thank you so much for sharing <3
GenerationX
#2
Chapter 1: That was a very moving story. Brought tears to my eyes when Joon was on the phone with this woman and Mir could just hear it all. It was so utterly disrespectful! I really appreciated they could overcome this... Mir was incredibly strong! He held a happy face while his heart was breaking. And Joon was despicable in the beginning. So cold. I loved how you described Mir's sorrow after he let his tears fall when Joon voiced his wish to divorce. It was heart breaking! And sometimes people just seem to, just like Mir and Joon here, hurt one another and there's just no room for love anymore. You expressed it so well through this one shot. Thank you for the good time authornim! ^^ it was great to read some Joomi again!
Lululaura93 #3
Chapter 1: No!!! Mir should have left. The fact that Joon cheated will always stay. He cheated! Of course people make mistake but not to someone like Mir and not in such cruel way when obviously he is still in love with Mir. I'm doubting Joon's love severely. While Mir... Mir will just fall deeper ifior he didn't get out of this or was it too late already? Oh my baby Mir is hurting so much. It was unfair of Joon being so inconsistent. It will not be the same again. Mir might be able to feel happy with Joon by his side but once Joon was not there to cloud his view then he will realize the pain that never fade. Oh I wish Mir had left. After all even if it would break him further at least in time maybe Mir will learn to love himself more and it might be better that waybe. It's better to be defeated while learning to love himself than defeated while yearning love that hurt him in the first place
*ps : idiot joon just give mir to me I'll baby him like precious little angel he is
Authornim. This is good. This is GREAT. I love you and the way you write. Oh man... my stomach hurt from all the angst.
MY BABY MIRRRR