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This shop is here to help YOU with your writing woes.
If English isn't your first language, never fear.
If you are a beginner at writing, do not stress.
If you feel the need to test your writing against a rubric, come forward!
Do not hesitate to request help.
Shop Status:busy
**5 pending requests max at a time. If you request and there are already 5 pending requests, do not expect your request to be listed or even accepted.**
Fanfiction Review vs. Serious Review
Writing Scenes Tutorials (by request)
Rules
1. Fill the form out properly and post it in the Comments Section. Please subscribe so I can contact you.
2. Give me time to read. If I take a long time understand I am busy with other things but I will definitely get you your review.
**NOTE: If you have a specific date you need the review by please inform me and I’ll do everything in my power to get it to you by then.
3. Do not pester me. I’ll become spiteful and purposefully take longer to do your review.
4. Personally, I write Yaoi and therefore specialize in that sense. However, I'm perfectly capable of editing and/or reviewing any type of couple, story type, etc.
5. If you ever want clarifications for the review I have given you, don't hesitate to ask.
6. If you are unhappy with your score then go ahead and fight with me. I'll defend the score.
7. Be sure that you want a review from me and that you will not be hurt by whatever score you're given. I spend time combing through your story and therefore am very sure of what I'm saying (more or less...).
Request Form: Scene Writing Tutorials
Username: (what do you go by?)
Scene Type: (what type of situation do you need help writing?)
That is, if you want tips on writing certain types of scenes, such as, brutal, seductive, rape, marriage, goodbyes, vampires, fights, break ups, etc, then I will do so and post it here.
Request Form: Review/ Writing Help
Username: (what do you go by?)
Story Title: (what is it called?)
Story Link: (what's the story link?)
Area of Help: (Dialogue, Description, Specific Scenes, etc.)
Review Type: Fanfiction or Serious (ref. to Fanfiction Review vs. Serious Review)
*Fanfiction Review = I will grade with the mindset that this is fanfiction. E.g. Any review chapter up until Chapter 30.
*Serious Review = I will grade with the mindset that you're beyond simple fanfiction and you want your work to be treated like a serious effort. E.g. Chapter 31
Specifications: (Is there a certain chapter you want me to look at? Do you need help over all?)
**If Specifications: (send a link to the section, or send me a message with the particular paragraph/sentence/phrase/scene you need help with)
Foreword
What Genre Do You Write?

Fanfiction Reviews - High Scoring Stories (85% and higher):
Covetous - 94% (removed)
Trapped!.. In The Kingdom Of The Forbidden Romance - 88%
Zugzwang, Zwischenzug. - 97%
Everyday is a Sunday Evening - 85%
Serious Reviews - High Scoring Stories (85% and higher):
Pending
**All previous pending stories have been removed. If you would still like a review, then request again. Thank you.**
Slave: Betrayal by KatyMikayla
Flair by ErisChaotica
The Way Home by genieforyou14
Losses on the Day which Fire Blazed by Junyoshi
Warflower by ErisChaotica
Completed
Saving a Smile by genieforyou14
Everyday is a Sunday Evening by Maudmoonshine
Our Personal Arithmetic by Ataraxy
Taehun's Dying Wishes by Paula1988
That Bastard by MissTangerine
Abominable by TheLaughingKirby
The Irreversible Beguilement by Tantk11
I'm Yours by MissTangerine
High School with Famous Idols by KPopLoverrr22
Sexual Encounters by Shaza_BigBang_
Zugzwang, Zwischenzug by Changcheree
Our {Naughty} Little Maknaes ♡ by LEETAEMINTLOVE
Trapped!.. In The Kingdom Of The Forbidden Romance by Chae_Ri08
Ends With Me by 4klover
Baby Baby~ by keishota
Undeniable Love of a Vampire by turtlejusz
Life is Never Normal by 1234 cve
The Black Viper Host Club by 1234 cve
You Drove Me To This by 1234 cve
Love Isn't Blind by 1234 cve
Untitled by ctrl_me
Spotted Love by junyoshi
Destiny of Love by sulliviera
Changing Illusion into Reality by Junyoshi
Covetous by ReddyHong
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yuu014 on says:
i read the rubrics and wow! That's the best criteria i have ever read. .i hope you can review a story of mine someday xD
kamanaa on says:
Hello, I was wondering when you might be open for requests. :)
junyoshi on says:
Hi~ my fanfic (losses on the day which fire blazed) is one of those that's in the pending category. I'm just popping by to let u know that I would like a serious review. So go ahead and be as harsh as u possibly can. ^^
But I don't know if my one-shot is considered as the write-well-overall type of story. Hehe.
ThatOneOtherWriter on says:
Username: ThatOneOtherWriter
Story Title: My Brother's 'Brother'
Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/190638/my-brother-s-brother-drama-korean-romance-seunghyun-siwon-yaoi-yunho
Area of Help: Character Development [despite the brevity of it so far...]
Review Type: Fanfiction
Specifications: None
Thank you in advanced :3
Maudmoonshine on says about chapter 26:
Thank you for the review!~ I'm sorry I wasn't able to comment right away because my sched has been really crazy as of late :D
You're right, i really should pay attention on the language that I used. I've got quite a number of reviews mentioning my use of 'Hyukkie' or 'Mochi' wasn't really appropriate for such an angsty fic like this. Thanks for pointing it out and explaining why this isn't good.
The second half was like a touch-and-go for me since I wrote it as a one-shot (meaning, the story ended when Eunhyuk met Sunri) because I was hesitant on how to portray a violent psycho-fan. That's why the flow is a bit rush and some descriptions are a bit awkward >_<
But thanks a lot for the score. I really did not expect that. :D I already credited you in the foreword.
genieforyou14 on says about chapter 27:
I would love to see what you have to say about Saving a Smile through a fanfiction review as well. Thank you for the review :)
KatyMikayla on says:
Username: KatyMikayla
Story Title: Slave: Betrayal
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/272635/slave-betrayal-super-junior-version-angst-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-jessica-romance-sungmin
Area of Help: just an overall review of how well it's written. I know a few people ahve told me that Jesscia's a 2D person, but that's going to change as the story progresses
Specifications: Nope.
Thank you :)
ErisChaotica on says:
Username: ErisChaotica
Story Title: Flair
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/280704/flair-dongwoo-infinite-woohyun
Area of Help: None in particular, anything that you think needs work is fine
Specifications: N/A
Notes: The mention of cancer in my story, while not elaborated upon, was not done for the sake of a cheap device. Assuming I finish the story (which should be very soon) before you get to it, I'm adding a note at the end addressing this issue just as a sort of memo to the readers.
genieforyou14 on says:
I'm not sure if I'm allowed to request two reviews... but here I go :)
Username: genieforyou14
Story Title: The Way Home
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/110633/the-way-home-angst-infinite-romance-sad-sungjong-shortfic
Area of Help: Clarity in emotion
Specifications: n/a
I wrote this a LONG time ago... almost a year ago? And my writing style has changed quite a bit since then. I'm just wondering what you think of it :)
paula1988 on says about chapter 24:
thanks for reviewing it and I will keep doing my best if I can :)
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