Seungri is gay, and likes Jiyong. But there's just one problem. Jiyong is straight. What will happen when Seungri finally comes clean and opens up to Jiyong?
Chapter 7: its wasn't real?!!...(sigh).....whatever your plan Ri, the dragon deadly jealous right now!!and ji will definitely explode when he know you sleeping at Top bedroom!
Chapter 7: Yes, this was a good chapter. I can't wait to see how Ji handle Seungri coming out of TOP's room in the morning. He is going to be so mad.... I love it. I can already see him running up to TOP trying to find out what is going on, why he and Seungri slept together last night. Jealous much Ji.
Chapter 6: Yay, thanks for the update. Yes, it did feel a little rushed, but it was cute.. I think the club scene should have been a little angst, with Ji taking Ri outside to yell and say that "We use to drink and have fun like this" like trying to see why they aren't close anymore. Then maybe Seungri would have said, "Yeah, we did, but I am trying to move on. Remember you said you didn't love me" Then maybe Ji would continue to question his feeling. It just seem like we rushed through a year to get to the kissing. No angst, no spending time together to develop his feeling for Seungri. No prior moments. However, you are doing an awesome job and we are really thankful that you are writing and updating continuously. Maybe, you can play this chapter as a thought that ran through Ji's head about what he wanted to do this night, but it didn't happen. Then you can begin the next chapter with them maybe beginning to hang around each other again. Then Ji asking about Jax and his friendship. So we can begin to see the jealousy build up. Then we can have Ji start to push Ri to hang out or Maybe some small arguments, that lead up to them finally kissing. Then a little confusion on both parts as to what and why it happened. Then Ji really searching himself about his feelings for Ri.
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