All the things I didn't say

Description

We were never meant to last but it still hurts.

Foreword

Characters: Wonpil & heiress!OC

Setting: post break-up AU

Genre: angst

Word count:  1246

Songrec: Halsey - Eyes Closed (stripped)

Day6 needs more love so I write angst about them (me at my brain: WHY?)

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nd1903 #1
Chapter 1: this is so beautiful
DarkJustice
#2
Chapter 1: You and your poetic writing. Round of applause. Indeed. Beautiful just as it was before.. I liked the description and even though I dont recognise the characters I knew this story wouldn't let me down. And it certainly didn't. Good work. I loved it.
adyoreyou
#3
Chapter 1: pink sweater WHYYYYYYYYYYYY hahahahhahahahaha
btw wonpil really have star-filled eyes its unresistable
MinYewon
#4
Chapter 1: Darling,
Right now I'm a bit upset because I already wrote this comment once and it was a quite coherent one but I will try my best in the bus once again. Hopefully it will be at least half as good as the previous one was. So...
This story was so sad in a completely odd way. I mean, I expected something else although the title tells a lot about your short story. I feel.sorry for the femine heroine because the fact that she loves the boy makes her victim of her lifestyle. Of her family?! In my opinion, everyone deserves true love and her words showed that happiness is not always an option. She has duty and sometimes it has to be more important. Poor girl! She really deserves better. Oh and the tone of the farewell. She really blames herself and the fact only makes this already painful goodbye even more miserable.
It was a beautiful one like always. I cannot wait to go home at one am or so and write something after I'll wake up, before we'll meet.
Have a wonderful day xx
restless_maknae
#5
Chapter 1: First of all, I'm so happy that there's another DAY6 story out there because they deserve more recognition and I'm certain that your story did justice to the boys, especially Wonpil. *-*
Secondly, even though the story was relatively short, you could convey so many emotions that I didn't feel like something was lacking. It was like being on a memory lane and watching the bits of their relationship, both the fluffy and angsty ones. I knew that I should have been ready for such an ending but it made me so sad that it seems that Wonpil didn't even know that she loved him. I mean, we knew that she didn't want to make her life harder because she was aware of their fate; they had to part ways because of her status. Yet, not even telling him how she felt must have broken not only her but his heart, too. Oh man, what a sad story. T.T
No matter how sullen you made me, I'm still thankful for this wonderful read! It was beautiful, emotional and heart-breaking but really of the best kind. As long as it's you and your stories, I would gladly volunteer to get my heart broken. ^^