about

peaches n' cream, sweeter than sweet. chocolate cheeks and chocolate wings. okay now that i promoted my kings bts, lets get serious. peaches n' cream is a newly opened review shop owned by me, kimbxp. most of you probably don't know me because i'm a loner who can't keep in touch for too long. but my has been on aff for a while now. i'm far from being a professional writer, but i'm very passionate about languages, writing, reading and helping others out. hence, with this shop, i aim to give writers the feedback they need. also, i intend to help you improve with your writing by pointing out the aspects that could and should be worked on over in your story. i will provide examples of what's wrong and how you can improve, mostly in regards of the grammar, characterization and setting. like i stated above, i'm not a professional, thus the review entirely depends upon my experiences as both a reader and writer and what i've learned throughout the years.

rules & guidelines

subscribe, it's mandatory. upvotes aren't necessarily requested, but highly appreciated. 

be patient. i'll take five requests before closing the shop and will open it again once I'll have the five requests completed. 

I won't sugarcoat my reviews, so if you're sensible and can't take constructive criticism, don't ask for a review. however, if you think i was unfair with your review, do pm me. Don't bash the shop. 

complete the request form correctly. 

once you've read your review leave a comment and not just a “picked it up. thanks” for the love of jesus, don't be that kind of . 

credit me in the foreword of your story or write a blog post about the shop. You pick.

don't request for a review if your story is in draft status or friends only.

the password is your current fav song.

don't be shy to ask any questions regarding reviews. 

 

what i will be evaluating

title: is there a correlation between your title and your story? Is it relevant? Is it eye catching? 

description/foreward: is the description appropriate? does it reveal too much or not enough? Does it grab the reader's attention and makes him want to read more? 

plot: is your plot well planned? Does it make sense? Is it cliché? 

pace/flow of the story: are you rushing things or are you too slow? 

characterization: are your characters relatable? Cliché? Are they consistent with their personality? how well do they develop throughout the story? 

themes: what are the main themes of your story? how well do you present them? how do they affect your characters and plot?

setting: where does your story take place? does the environment description fit the story's themes and the characters' mood? How does the setting plays a role in your story? 

grammar; are you using words accurately? is your syntax good? How often do you vary your words? are you using connecting words appropriately? what about ponctuation? do you happen to repeat yourself? are you being too detailed or not enough? what about dialogues? 

groups i review; bts / winner / day6 / ikon / akmu / leehi / black pink / day6 / the rose / astro / bigbang / twice / every solo artists / 

stories i won't be reviewing; pwp, stories that contains and extreme violence. 

i dont care if it's boyxboy, girlxgirl, idolxidol or ocxidol as long as it's about one of the group listed above.

 

request form

• story title;

• author's name;

• pairing;

• link to the story;

• password;

• is there any aspect you'd like me to focus on? anything you'd like to tell me before i start reading your story?