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The Necklace // Ginerrulez // - // -
Twinkling Lights for the Sinners // KissDromedaGirl // - // pending
Outweight Your Heart // SnowCakie // - // pending
I Love You A Lattle (One Day I'm Going to Hurt You) // Yoshi875 // - // pending
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Tumbleweed - hiatus

Preferred: Straight relationships, romanace, angst, mystery, comedy, ( is fine but no )

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hwaranni
#1
Chapter 10: hello! thank you so much for the review on my story, it's amazing how detailed you were. the amount of time spent waiting was worth it, istg. ♡
i just can't find the right words to express how grateful i am because you pointed on both the good and bad points and i really appreciate it! i feel motivated to start writing again as well as improving myself. i'm really glad you seemed to enjoy my story and yes, i agree - mafia!aus are precious. haha. again, thank you for the review! it was wonderful - you're all wonderful.
lazy_lazuli
#2
Chapter 10: *sniff* I want to do another fic so I can get a nice long review too *cries in Korean* 。゚(゚ノД`゚)゚。
diamondELF193
#3
Hi there~ Just submitted for Puppy Love! Love lots <3
blacksmile
#4
Chapter 8: Okay I'm back! Ahh, about Chanyeol's character, I tried to portray him as someone who is a slow learner. Therefore his cognitive and behaviour development doesn't match his age. Plus, the environment he was in halt his development. I think it was my fault since I didn't emphasize on how he was treated differently in a severe protective manner by both Changmin's parents and the Kims. Since he was 'abnormal', both Changmin's parents and the Kims exclude him from the world in fear of Chanyeol getting hurt along the way through his adulthood. I've touched on this topic on the later chapter when Yifan discussed with Mrs Kim to take Chanyeol under his wings. Yifan convinced Mrs Kim that Chanyeol should not be treated any different from other 'normal' people and that he should be exposed to all the things kids his age are exposed too. He wants Chanyeol to explore the world and live the normal life he had missed before.

Honestly, i totally understand the uncomfortableness that creeps in while reading a few parts of this fanfic because when I reread those parts, I myself cringe in disbelieve like, 'wow did I actually write this part?'. So, it's cool.

Thank you for the awesome review!

Have properly credited you :D
blacksmile
#5
Chapter 8: Hai! I just noticed my review is up! I'm on my phone right now but I will get back to you and properly credit this shop once I got my hands on my laptop! :)
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ali060903
#7
I've credited! :D
ali060903
#8
Hello! Thank you so much for spending time writing such a detailed, long and constructive review for my story. I promise I'll remember your suggestions and apply it into my future writing. Right now I'm on a trip so I just don't have a computer with me to credit you properly but I will as soon as I get home. And sorry for a short feedback because I still haven't gotten time to read it fully but I will leave a comment once again after I read it twice for more details. Thanks your shop for offering me a chance to improve myself! XOXO
LUVkookietae
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Chapter 7: I've picked up my review! I have to say, I honestly just expected something short, not a whole planned out thing with sections on plot and whatnot.

Thank you so much for the honest review! I never really knew what to think of the story, as I was writing based on real-life emotions and I was kinda upset at the time, so I didn't really pay much attention to the little details. Actually the little scenes with Miss Gayoung were a little off, but to me she is a crucial mentor, someone really improtant to me in my life but as another person.

And the Chinese at the end, it was actually a confession to that one person I wrote this for, and he'd know if he read it. As I mentioned, I was distraught at that time, so I was just really concerned about it and I wanted to let him know what I really feel. So this wasn't really a story for readers but more of a letter to a special someone. I actually just wanted to review it cuz I thought it was written really badly and I needed another opinion.

Thanks so much!
proudjbstan #10
i requested :)