Chapter 2: I live in London, you see, and the other day I was walking past a park where some people were playing football and suddenly had a vision of Taemin playing football in a park in London. The thoughts in my head went a bit like this: "did Taemin play in a park when he visited London? Wait, it was Minho to come to London in One Fine Day, not Taemin. Did Minho play football in a park? No, I don't remember that... but why did I think of Taemin? ... oh. OH!"
The image from your story was so vivid I confused it for reality for a moment haha. I guess I'll be re-reading this epilogue now, so good :)
Chapter 4: I actually prefer the original ending because the seeming lack of sentimentality in their exchange at the cafe actually underlined how much they loved and understood each other, but that’s just me. I understand the need to explain other things and closure. I just hoped they were able to come in contact with Jinnie-hyung. Hahaha!
Chapter 3: I just recently found this story but it was such a wonderful find. Thank you for sticking with it and sharing it with us. I absolutely love the characterization of Kibum and the way you have layered in the relationships in the story. Also just want to say the way you change pov in the story is really seamless and i did not find jarring or have it take it out of the story at any point - so really impressed by that and thought you should know.
Hi dear. I ended up crying a lot. I loved every word. Thank you so much. TVD is so special to me. Thank you for all emotions I've been through while reading it. Xxx
Chapter 3: 3: Ugggggshsjsjskdndnnxd my heartttttt *drops to the ground* Goshhhh everythings about this chapter is so soft and emotional. Finally Kibum is accepting his feelings, the sky is clear and the world is such a refreshing place to be in again. Awesome.
Also, love that Kibum has to still call Jjong when he freaks out. That connection they still have is very cute.
Thank you for having this be a happy ending after lightly crushing our hearts in the previous one.
Ps. I would love to see Taem top some day too according to his own suggestions hehe ???
Chapter 3: Seriously thank you for writing this epilogue I was really worried something would go wrong and somehow it'd be a sad ending but jonghyun was there to save the day!! This whole story was such a rollercoaster I'm just so happy to see that kibum's and taemin's lives didn't end with just that. Incredible writing
Chapter 3: This was just so poignant and beautiful. I love how the epilogue started and ended at the cafe. And I love how the enforced separation was a totally necessary trope for Kibum to find himself so he could love Taemin properly, and how Taemin never really outgrew his love for Key-Hyung. Finally, I love how thoughtful this story was written. Thank you, Author-nim, for the best TaeKey fic I've ever read.
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